Comments | simpleparadox: Dawn and Dusk

simpleparadox

Oct 12, 2005 03:23

Constructive critcism welcome, I want to submit poetry to a school literature magazine ( Read more... )

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fallen_angel777 October 12 2005, 14:51:56 UTC

I like it. Lots of striking imagery.
You get a cookie :)

simpleparadox October 12 2005, 21:56:15 UTC

thanks bub. we never talk anymore :( we dont get a cookie for that