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simplyprologue

Shatter My Heart (1/1)

Jan 27, 2013 16:42

Title: Shatter My Heart
Rating: MA
Word Count: ~5.6K
Characters and Pairings: Spaceparents; Laura Roslin, Bill Adama
Disclaimer: Still not mine. I'd treat them a bit nicer than Moore did, though.
Summary: “I’m almost finished,” she says, and Bill realizes that she’s known he’s been standing there, in her doorway, for quite some time. She's lost the ( Read more... )

ship: spaceparents, char: bill adama, char: laura roslin, fic: battlestar galactica

Comments 15

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simplyprologue January 28 2013, 02:18:23 UTC

One day, I am going to title something using that formula and you're going to be so shocked.
Omg pins and needles I just um used that line shamelessly idek okay I just went with what Mira said, no holds barred. I'm so glad the stream of consciousness worked. And that it was IC! Ugh babies.
And the ending line is great, isn't it? I was real proud of myself with that one. I hope the ending part wasn't too much of a turn off for people not into DtS/baby!fic, but I guess we'll find out.

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simplyprologue January 28 2013, 06:56:40 UTC

It's just super vague what she's dazed about, so hopefully people aren't just gonna be wtf. Wah. Also I suck and DtS should be posted Tuesday-ish? Some shit went down today with my friend group so I didn't get enough time to dedicate to Ch4.

michiruwater January 28 2013, 04:03:39 UTC

You seriously write the best smut ever. Honestly, if I had a million dollars I would just pay you to write me spaceparents smut. But, unfortunately for both of us...

simplyprologue January 28 2013, 06:57:08 UTC

Oh my god, thank you so much! And haha, you don't have to pay me anything, I take requests! :)

defyingnormalcy January 28 2013, 04:29:06 UTC

This is such a fascinating point in their relationship to explore. I really love how you've written them, how you've considered their circumstances as affecting them, and their growing romance. Nicely done. :)

simplyprologue January 28 2013, 06:58:27 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad it came off well. I was challenged by a friend to plausibly: a. have Laura say "I love you" first, and b. have them do it on election night... and uh, it took some thought there.

Thanks again. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

mellow_mel January 28 2013, 17:14:51 UTC

simplyprologue March 10 2013, 02:38:41 UTC

Thanks! And thanks for the comment over on AO3 for Down the Sky. I'm glad you're enjoying my strange little AU.

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simplyprologue March 10 2013, 02:39:59 UTC

Thank you! (And yes, definitely will be continued. I'm just as slow as molasses in January when it comes to writing it.) (Although, as I'm finally responding to your lovely comment, I can say that it's been updated. Finally.) (Oh god I'm so sorry my readers deserve much better than me, lol.)