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simsim_hb

Ginzura Advent day 6 prompt: fic part 1

Feb 01, 2011 23:09

Loosely based on the 6th day ginzura advent prompt.
Beta by the very patient Pixelated Bloodbath.
No Pairings.

( A big shiny white smile alone doesn't make you beautiful )

Comments 5

denshi_no_ultra February 2 2011, 14:44:30 UTC

The idea is really interesting and I like your style - there were many funny moments in the fic, and you often managed to capture the spirit of Gintama :) I hope you'll be able to get the fic betaed someday because there is some room for improvement. I'll still be looking forward to the next chapter! Thank you for writing :)

simsim_hb February 2 2011, 17:25:56 UTC

Thank you very much for reading! To tell you the truth, I read this over like 100 times but by then I'd reached a point where I just wanted it out of my face, lol. I'll try to get someone to look at it.
Its much harder to write Gintama that I originally anticipated, but I'm trying~

denshi_no_ultra February 3 2011, 01:14:52 UTC

I think it's really difficult to write Gintama - the series is just so awesome it's difficult to do justice to it, but I think you've managed to :)

Good luck with the next chapter and getting a beta :)

simsim_hb February 6 2011, 03:36:36 UTC

I used to write for the Fruits basket fandom and that was easier cause only like characters were crazy while here you have an entire cast full of crazy, lol.

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simsim_hb February 2 2011, 21:22:12 UTC

Thank you very much for reading~
I'm glad at least the dialogue seems plausible, lol. I don't know if its obvious, but Katsura is probably my favorite character so I tried extra hard to make him dramatic and stupid, while Kagura is always hungry so it's not too hard with her ;)
Working on a beta and the next part!