I'm rather curious: do you side with Aurora or her parents? Or neither side, either because you can see both sides or because you don't think either one has a valid point at all? For me, it's hard to agree with any of them, since they both seem like opposite extremes of what I'd say in either position
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I agree with neither. I'm working on elaborating in further chapters, as I'm making a list of things people have told me to improve on. To clarify: she's a teenager, underage. She's too young to drink, and moral-wise, too young to be having sex, especially with much older people. Yes, I entirely forgot about buy mode. I only noticed until afterwards, when I was putting pictures up. For Aurora's Father, he was doing a argue animation; and then he decided Amelia's piano was better. Once again, I didn't notice. I'll have to pay more attention, and possible kick her off the piano the next time. Wade's picture, now that I think about it, makes little to no sense. Can't defend myself there. For the ceilings, yes, I forgot about the first picture, but you may have noticed the others had ceilings. Thank-you, I'm going to write down the ideas you said and use them in the future.
You might want to rephrase that in the actual entry, just so it's clear in case others come to read.
Don't worry, those aren't a big deal! But it's good to keep them in mind for the later chapters, and you'll get better at remembering with more practice.
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To clarify: she's a teenager, underage. She's too young to drink, and moral-wise, too young to be having sex, especially with much older people.
Yes, I entirely forgot about buy mode. I only noticed until afterwards, when I was putting pictures up. For Aurora's Father, he was doing a argue animation; and then he decided Amelia's piano was better. Once again, I didn't notice. I'll have to pay more attention, and possible kick her off the piano the next time.
Wade's picture, now that I think about it, makes little to no sense. Can't defend myself there.
For the ceilings, yes, I forgot about the first picture, but you may have noticed the others had ceilings.
Thank-you, I'm going to write down the ideas you said and use them in the future.
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Don't worry, those aren't a big deal! But it's good to keep them in mind for the later chapters, and you'll get better at remembering with more practice.
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