Hey guys!
I've had a chapter of my story sitting aside for a while because the ending was driving me insane. I have it posted now, but I'm still not happy with the way I worded it. It got to a point where I just wanted to get it posted and done with.
I'm going to keep it how it is. I think it gets the picture across, just not very well. I wanted to
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I'd change it to something more like
As soon as Sax closed his eyes, he was asleep.
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