Comments | sinfulpoet: Still needs a title

sinfulpoet

Still needs a title

Mar 10, 2005 20:26

Well the ending needs abit of work but here it is

Looking into myself I see
Hope for a greater tomorrow
Faith that everything will turn out alright
Confidence in all that I do
And the strength to overcome what may lie ahead

Then I think about what I can see and I realise something
All that is inside of me is simply that
Inside me.
The me you all know is ( Read more... )

Comments 3

anonymous March 11 2005, 04:15:43 UTC

sexy, what if you added..

"What I want."

to the ending? HMMMM? i dunno, im not a poet...

thebreton_16 March 11 2005, 23:01:36 UTC

Title it "poetry is gay."

jaggedsoul13 March 13 2005, 06:29:50 UTC

Bahhh never edit poetry. The first draft is always the best because that's when you were inspired. If you keep trying to make it perfect it will just end up being like something else someone has already written. I like it the way it is.

Btw, you still at superstore? Or did you quit? Haha.

-Veronica