Canis: Inhumanity

Jan 23, 2008 01:39


Monster.

I fly, straight and true, above the city shrouded in ice. The world below moves sluggishly at this height, distance warping time like a hand pushing upon a net. Ice collects on my flesh, bringing shine to some planes and dulling others. Ice is beautiful - cold and unflinching. It forms in the second it takes for my wings to beat, shattering ( Read more... )

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thedarkmother January 23 2008, 12:53:25 UTC
Oooh, I really like this. Very eloquent, even though as you imagine the action, you don't expect him to be such. I like the contrast a lot.

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charliegir1 January 23 2008, 14:53:14 UTC
Promethian or Changeling? (dani cocks head)

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sinfulstories January 23 2008, 19:20:44 UTC
Neither. Geoff's game. :-)

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quiet_librarian January 26 2008, 00:23:00 UTC
I...really like this, Zack. It's so wonderfully descriptive its deliberate, agonising ponderousness, rock grating against rock as it tries to move.
As always, your descriptive talent is surpassing.

P.

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