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sweetness in black coffee

Mar 23, 2010 14:42

Title: sweetness in black coffee
Pairing(s): Sakurai Sho/Ishihara Satomi
Rating: PG
Word Count: ~5700
Summary: Satomi's last days before graduation are filled with classes to sleep in, dreams to believe in, and wishes of kisses that taste like coffee and English conversations.
A/N: This was written for the amazing nicefinalbeam in celebration of the 2010 je_whiteday ( Read more... )

pairing: sho/satomi, group: arashi, !fandom: johnny's entertainment, rating: pg

Comments 14

r_1_ss_a March 23 2010, 21:30:09 UTC

this was so beautiful and so well written. i love reading the different parts and imagining them with your wonderful descriptions. <3

thanks so much for sharing this. :)

augustfai March 27 2010, 05:31:46 UTC

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! ♥

miscetera March 23 2010, 22:16:46 UTC

She has never been a coffee drinker, but maybe now is the time to try new things, if only so she could somehow become connected to that one flash of movement.

It's thirty degrees and raining outside, but I read this and felt so comforted. There's a fullness in your writing that lends itself so well to a story centered around two people with big dreams lying ahead of them and mugs of coffee steaming their faces with incredible warmth right in front of them. The sense of coherency in your writing is a thing to be reckoned with, certainly, because you present the theme throughout the story so wonderfully, in a way that's easy to follow--but what I will forever adore about your writing is how affectionate and true-to-life it is; how people's actions are always about finding a connection to their loved ones.

Thank you so much for sharing this little treasure. ♥

augustfai March 27 2010, 05:31:25 UTC

Oh oh oh. You are an incredible person, and this is, cross my heart, one of the best comments I have ever gotten. Thank you for reading, and so thoroughly! It is the best compliment when someone tells me that my fic has touched them in some way, and to know that this comforted you--that's enough to put a smile on my face. ♥♥♥

pebblegosling March 23 2010, 22:35:00 UTC

Adored this when I first read it, still do now.
<3 <3 I have to find more of your stuff now.

augustfai March 27 2010, 05:32:27 UTC

♥ It's all in one place, so I hope it won't be too hard. Thank you for taking the time to read this one though, and for commenting. :)

starfruitangel March 24 2010, 12:45:56 UTC

this. ♥ so therapeutic after my crappy day at work today. Thank you:) btw, is there a link to the sho/satomi pimp posts?

augustfai March 27 2010, 05:33:21 UTC

♥ I love when a fic does that! Thank you for reading and commenting. :) And I'm pretty sure that the posts are flocked, but I will ask the author if it's okay for them to be shared and then let you know.

maiaide March 25 2010, 15:34:25 UTC

Round of applause! That was so adorable. I love Satomi and she and Sho would make a beautiful looking couple. I'm glad that this is what you were given to work with. I love coffee shops and cafes and the romanticism of them. <3 Satomi is a great character here in all her ditzy spunkiness. And Sho can teach me English any day. ;)

Job well done~

augustfai March 27 2010, 05:34:25 UTC

♥ Thank you so much, bb! (Also, YOUR ICON, I HAVE ETERNAL LOVE FOR IT.) Honestly I breathed a sigh of relief when I got this prompt and at the same time was filled with so much panic. I'm glad it turned out well though, and that you enjoyed it!

Oh and YES. Sho can teach me anything he wants to, anytime. ;)

maiaide March 27 2010, 08:33:05 UTC

Hehe it is a great icon. I only bust it out for special occasions. ;)

Well, it helps you had Aes's help. LOL It was nice and refreshing... there isn't enough het done well in JE fandom.

I want to learn how he crams so many syllables into a single bar of music. Srsly.