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a place to bloom

May 04, 2011 04:13

Title: a place to bloom
Pairing(s): Jun/Ohno, Jun/Sho
Rating: PG
Word Count: ~4800
Summary: AU. Jun's new apartment feels just right to him, but Ohno thinks there might be room for one more.
Notes: This was written for r_1_ss_a for the arashi_on fandom fundraiser! The prompt was, in a nutshell, 'Jun'--any pairing, any genre, anything goes. Despite the fact that I may ( Read more... )

group: arashi, pairing: sho/jun, fundraiser, pairing: ohno/jun, !fandom: johnny's entertainment, rating: pg

Comments 19

waxrose May 4 2011, 09:37:42 UTC

This is lovely! Also:

though he quickly puts the idea aside as he remembers who his friends are and what they would do to his unsuspecting apartment.

THIS IS PRECISELY WHY I AM AVOIDING THROWING A HOUSEWARMING. I want to keep my place shiny.

augustfai May 6 2011, 00:55:10 UTC

Thank you for reading, bb! ♥

And RIGHT? I'm moving into an apartment for this summer/next year and all I can think is, "Must. Keep. It. SHINYYYY."

lianne29 May 4 2011, 10:37:21 UTC

beautiful.

I had fun picturing the apartment building - the rose-vines, the princesses, the witch

augustfai May 6 2011, 00:55:33 UTC

♥ thank you so much for reading!

calerine May 4 2011, 13:28:48 UTC

This is really really pretty, with all your descriptions and just-right words. Your words sing and I really like how they always paint a picture in my mind, with this exact shade of colours. I always think that when you write, magic happens. That's why I wouldn't want to miss your writing for anything.

augustfai May 6 2011, 01:04:49 UTC

♥ There's not much I can say to this except thank you.

rinalin May 4 2011, 20:21:35 UTC

Jun/Sho and Jun/Ohno aren't really my cup of tea, and I usually skip over fic with them. But it's you and I trust you in everything you write. This was amazing. Well done and thoughtful and UNIQUE. I loved the roles that Aiba and Nino played in the background, supportive and comfortable and just THERE.

I loved every word.

augustfai May 6 2011, 01:06:31 UTC

Reading this makes me nothing short of wonderfully, wonderfully happy. Thank you so much, and I hope that everything I write from now on manages to make you feel the same way. ♥

r_1_ss_a May 4 2011, 21:24:26 UTC

i've reread this like three times already. <3 this was so wonderful! not only did you write a jun-centered fic but you wrote him in a scene with each of the guys and i just LOVE that. :)

i think i've mentioned before that i love the way you write jun and ohno. not a lot of people write the two and most of the time, it's written in a not so nice way so it's always a treat when i see a fic from you (especially when it's for me :D ) and it's about the two!

PLUS, you gave me jun and sho to boot, HOW CAN I NOT LOVE THIS?

i love your words, the way you described the building and the flowers, Jun and Ohno's "complicated" relationship and the way Sho fits in between. It was bittersweet and (I'm such a sap) there were moments, I went AW and just wanted to hug Jun. My bias to Jun is HUGE, can you tell? LOL. I love Jun's mixed feelings and how he didn't want to hope for too much but deep down HE DID.

Thank you so, so, so much for this. I loved it if you couldn't tell! :) I adore your writing and your fics! Thank you again! <3

augustfai May 6 2011, 01:11:11 UTC

Yaaay, I'm so glad you enjoyed this, bb! ♥ Don't worry--I am also a sap, so I know how you feel. I mean, I'm the one that wrote this and I wanted to hug Jun at the end. :(

Again, I'm happy you liked this as much as you did, and I'd be glad to write for you again ♥