and in the ocean we'll hold hands

[augustfai]

Title: and in the ocean we'll hold hands
Pairing(s): Ohno/a mermaid 
Rating: PG
Word Count: ~1350
Summary: What happens when things become too real, or: Ohno brings a mermaid home.
Notes: Because really, I just needed to write about the sea. This fic, which revolves around That Music Meme I have actually wanted to do for YEARS, comes as an in-between

Comments

[r_tenou]

This is absolutely lovely. ^_^ And the ending! It's sad, but it's also not sad; it's unexplainable. I love the attitude of your little mermaid and the way she treats Ohno. It's very endearing - the way they interact, the way he holds her hand everywhere. I'm going into a sweetness overload, I'm sure. :P

Thanks for sharing.

[augustfai]

Thank you for reading and commenting! ♥ I'm glad you feel that way about the end, actually; it's kind of what I was going for--but then again it was very hard to wrap this whole thing up in the ~2 minutes that song allowed. 8)

[i_am_zan]

This is absoutely gorgeous!!!! Truly. Original, refreshing and wonderfully magical!

Loves!

[augustfai]

Thank you so much! ♥

[__sine]

This! This is adorable and extremely lovely! The ending was bittersweet and when I glanced at the song title for that last drabble I knew it was perfect. ♥ This is such a gem, bb. Thank you for sharing! :)

[augustfai]

Why you always so lovely in commenting, bb? Thank you so much! ♥ This was a super difficult meme and I didn't expect it to be, so I'm really happy to hear that you liked it!

[rinalin]

This is so beautiful and sad all at once.Really wonderful job.

[augustfai]

♥ Thank you so much!

[lianne29]

Oh. This is lovely. Oh-chan is <3

It is also a little bittersweet but the ending fits.

[augustfai]

Thank you! Bittersweet is definitely the feel of this fic, I think, but I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)