Thirty-Second Experience

Feb 05, 2007 00:42

First Japanese clothes,
and now a day of haiku?
This is delightful!

I have always loved
the haiku form. It has such
possibility.

A dragonfly in
the cattails of Xanadu
will fly forever?

I'm rusty at this,
But I'll practice all today!
(Not a curse at all.)

Sky and stars above.
Earth and flowers for a path.
Such wonders I see.

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invisible_anita February 5 2007, 15:03:29 UTC
Your proficiency
With this form is astounding!
You write quite well, Maude.

This curse is not so
Worrisome as the others.
Let's enjoy the day.

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singout_singout February 5 2007, 17:17:59 UTC
Haiku? It's easy
To get the hang of. You are
Doing quite well, too!

A summer sunset,
Violet, gold, hazy colors
Warm me in winter.

Did someone say that?
Or did I make that one up?
Ah, well. Beautiful.

((OOC: Sorry for repost. Maude's better with her grammarizin' than I am. XD))

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invisible_anita February 5 2007, 20:08:31 UTC
Thank you, Maude. I have
Never seen that verse, so you
May well take credit.

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