OMG..PERFECT ANGST EVER! how cruel is the evil inside Jun can be?? I thought it only going to remain on his dreams but not into reality..poor junnie..sob..sob..sob..Nice shot dear!=)
I heard a scream at the last line. I'm not kidding, I'm sure I did.
6388 words of pure perfection. ♥ The emotions were conveyed so clearly, every word of angst and sorrow hit my heart like a bullet train and I swear this is one of the most beautifully-written works I have ever read. And it's going to haunt me for a long time to come, possibly forever.
Forgive me for bring too lazy to write a list out of what parts I love of this story, but your writing style and strategy is a genius. Simply speaking, you are a genius. I totally loved how insane and bloody the whole thing was, not to mention original, and sadistic. I could practically feel the pain and the horror of it all is somehow .. exciting.
As sick as all the events and dreams are, I enjoyed every part of this. And the ending created a major impact. I'd been holding back my tears while reading and at this line -"A kiss that said goodbye."- I just let it all go. Man, to think that my mum nearly caught me reading "irrelevant" stuff online. Whoops.The last line stabbed my heart
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(I am so so so sorry for replying so late to this wonderful and beautiful comment) Thank you so much for not only reading this but for all of the wonderful things that you said, it means a lot.
I was balling my eyes out when I wrote the last line of this story. The ending scene was so vivid in my mind that it felt real and I felt genuine pain while writing it...that's never happened to me before.
I'm so glad (as weird as this may sound) that you were able to feel the pain and the emotions, it means that I did my job right.
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how cruel is the evil inside Jun can be?? I thought it only going to remain on his dreams but not into reality..poor junnie..sob..sob..sob..Nice shot dear!=)
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I heard a scream at the last line. I'm not kidding, I'm sure I did.
6388 words of pure perfection. ♥
The emotions were conveyed so clearly, every word of angst and sorrow hit my heart like a bullet train and I swear this is one of the most beautifully-written works I have ever read. And it's going to haunt me for a long time to come, possibly forever.
Forgive me for bring too lazy to write a list out of what parts I love of this story, but your writing style and strategy is a genius. Simply speaking, you are a genius.
I totally loved how insane and bloody the whole thing was, not to mention original, and sadistic. I could practically feel the pain and the horror of it all is somehow .. exciting.
As sick as all the events and dreams are, I enjoyed every part of this. And the ending created a major impact. I'd been holding back my tears while reading and at this line -"A kiss that said goodbye."- I just let it all go.
Man, to think that my mum nearly caught me reading "irrelevant" stuff online. Whoops.The last line stabbed my heart ( ... )
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I was balling my eyes out when I wrote the last line of this story. The ending scene was so vivid in my mind that it felt real and I felt genuine pain while writing it...that's never happened to me before.
I'm so glad (as weird as this may sound) that you were able to feel the pain and the emotions, it means that I did my job right.
Thank you so much again♥
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