Chapter 3 of The Game

[citizencobalt]

This one took me a while to write. I keep agonizing over my portrayl of the female Kyuzo. Oh well, I've always been my toughest critic. Anyway, it might be a tad rough, but it's pretty much the third chapter. Enjoy!

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Comments

[jun_i]

Yay for the completed Ch 3! The portrayal of Kanbei as simultaneously sensitive and annoying is superb, hehe.

[i_am_zan]

oh I love this sooo much!

*sigh* and I'm sorry I don't comment every time! ..It's been hell around home! HUbby is away for two weeks and I get to play single parent at which I am rubbish at and which makes me take my hat off and exude total respect and awe at those who have to do it because there is no other choice!

but I read this and totally love it so much!