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WF Gift Exchange 2010 - Focus

Nov 28, 2010 12:52

Title: Focus ( Read more... )

ch: diana, dcau, ch: clark, fan fiction, gen, ch: bruce

Comments 16

her_ririness_ii November 29 2010, 14:23:30 UTC

Intense is exactly the right word to describe this. The shorthand style just fits Bruce. He probably taking notes the whole time in his head.

Bam. Crack. Just beautiful. Great fill.

sinisterf November 29 2010, 20:24:55 UTC

Thank you! I wondered about the repetition of the "Bam. Crack." it seemed right when I was writing it, but it is still one of those things that can end up not working. So, yeah, I am really happy that it did work :)

bradygirl_12 December 2 2010, 23:23:17 UTC

Such powerful moments! The screams, the sound of fists hitting flesh, the tentacled flower...and the pearls, always the pearls.

Wonderful job!

sinisterf December 3 2010, 09:55:36 UTC

Thank you!

ladyblkrose March 5 2011, 04:00:00 UTC

I have no words that will adequate express just how much this moved me. The next to last line was just heartwrending.
Thank you for sharing.

sinisterf March 5 2011, 12:22:38 UTC

Thank you! I am really glad you enjoyed it!