Word of the Day Drabble. H/D

[sinlesstomorrow]

Odious: adjective: Highly offensive; inspiring and deserving hatred.

Comments

[xenocia]

BOO. WHY ISN'T THIS LONGER D: Damn your drabble!

I liked it a lot 8D I haven't read any HP fics in awhile. It's nice to revisit :3 I liked how in this drabble it almost feels like they've switched positions. Harry is so cocky, confident and kinda dickish without even saying anything, so you really get an idea of what he's like just from Draco's perception of him. Draco, in turn is totally confuzzled; it's kind of adorable. Draco hadn't even known Potter was capable of a smirk like that. He's still got that trademark snarky and disdainful thought process, but he's so totally thrown by Harry's flipped personality XD Funfun~

Anywho~

hero-complexed arsehole
INDEED. I think it needs to be boned out of him, imo.

The point of his wand made contact with the small of Potter's back
Fufufu. I'm sorry, but I giggled >> too much porn writing today 8D

'Well,' he thought, 'at least I'll take his hero image down with me.'
That's the ticket, Draco! Hang on to your guns! :D

Writewritewrite~ <3

[sinlesstomorrow]

omgahftw...!

Thank you. I was so freaking nervous. I'm really glad you liked it. ^ ^

And yeah, my Harry's an ass. I love him that way. Canon be damned.

[brissygirl]

This was awesome! I much prefer longer ficlets/drabbles the traditional 100 words just isn't long enough!

Leave your readers wanting more, I ended my very first fic with a kiss too and everyone whose read it wants a sequel.

Loved Draco's internal dialogue and how he's slightly oblivious to his own bodies reaction to Harry. I would love to see what happens next. Does Draco go after Harry or does Harry come after Draco wanting a bit more than a kiss?

You've done a fantastic job for only your second drabble/fic!

[sinlesstomorrow]

*flail*

Thanks!!

It is a bit long to be a true drabble, I agree. I guess it's a ficlet? Or maybe it is a first chapter. I haven't decided yet. ^ ^

denial!draco is one of my favorites...he steadfastly refuses to see anything that he wouldn't admit to in public. Because what a Malfoy doesn't choose to see doesn't exist. lol

[miyakosuou]

Damn if that wasn't incredibly hot... great job, you have absolutely no need to be nervous. I can just imagine the look on Draco's face and it is HILARIOUS.

[sinlesstomorrow]

And I think Harry's the only one that can put that look on his face. :)

*excess of hugs for readers* ilu, thanks!

[fancypantsdylan]

Totally brilliant, I loved the way Draco is so taken off guard. Now a sequel wouldn't go a miss ;)

[sinlesstomorrow]

Brilliant is the greatest compliment...thank you! *showers with Andes Mints* Shh...I didn't steal those from Olive Garden.

*brainstorms possible follow-up*

[make_me_ramen]

*gets teary* my little beta is growing up.

*hops* maybe, if you start writing more, and i suddenly get more time, we can both be betas ^_^;;;;

I agree with everyone else, it should be longer.

[sinlesstomorrow]

I need a beta too...I had to edit this post like 4 times before I ran out of stuff that I was noticing on my own...I'm sure there's more.

I'm glad that you like it. I gotta say, I was really nervous. I know it's a little weird to hear, but I really admire your writing, so....ilu! Thanks!

[make_me_ramen]

I didn't really look that closely...

Why would it be weird to hear you admire my writing? Dork.

[sinlesstomorrow]

Shut up. I'm not a dork. *coughblatantcoughliecough*