Optimal Scenario, File 4.0

Aug 10, 2014 12:48

Title: Optimal Scenario

Warnings: Contains not-particularly graphic shonen ai, mild language, and violence.

Summary: FFVII, Vincent/Cloud. Shelke decides to play matchmaker. This mostly seems to involve tormenting Cloud.

Author's Note: Probably not going to be able to update on Tuesday for exciting reasons, so here, have the chapter early!  Why ( Read more... )

optimalscenario, final fantasy, longfic, fanfiction

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firedraygon97 August 12 2014, 03:26:39 UTC
So fun!!

1. Using Remedy to treat Confuse - this scene makes things much more realistic, since you've got to force your confused teammate to drink something while they're trying to attack you. Great detail!

2. I guess we should've been expecting a cross-dressing scene, haha. ;p

3. The play! It's been so long that I don't remember who I did the play with, Tifa, Aerith, Barrett...? Anyway, it was cute. <3

You definitely got me back into Vincent/Cloud reading, and I just machined through all of esama's fics this weekend. >__O Check those out if you haven't had a chance yet!

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sinnatious August 13 2014, 05:30:44 UTC
Thanks! I always used to wonder about that. Esuna is easy, but how were the other cures administered mid-battle?

Ahaha sorry, I nearly didn't do the cross-dressing thing since I've done it so many times already but why not. It seems to be a hit no matter how many times I revisit it. :P

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sinnatious August 13 2014, 05:32:24 UTC
Thanks! I should really devote more words to gratuitous Cloud description, it's what the people want! :P In all seriousness though sometimes I think writing fanfiction can make you lazy about writing descriptions so good to have that reminder.

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anonymous August 13 2014, 18:08:35 UTC
OMG, you are genius!!! I can't believe anyone could write Vincent/Cloud fanfiction without giant angst. And here you are!! Best crack ever!

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sinnatious August 14 2014, 02:45:20 UTC
Heh, thank you! It gets a little less cracky here on out but hope you enjoy it!

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