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sinnatious

Optimal Scenario, File 7.0

Sep 02, 2014 18:55

Title: Optimal Scenario

Warnings: Contains not-particularly graphic shonen ai, mild language, and violence.

Summary: FFVII, Vincent/Cloud. Shelke decides to play matchmaker. This mostly seems to involve tormenting Cloud.

Author's Note: Final chapter! This was a totally dumb, super simple and shallow story, but I hope you enjoyed it regardless. I ( Read more... )

optimalscenario, final fantasy, longfic, fanfiction

Comments 33

avianahelena September 3 2014, 06:03:01 UTC

Cloud, you are my hero. Straight to the making out!
And he's actually kind of perfect for Vincent, with all his experience in angst and woe. For all Cloud's trouble dealing with his own BS, I'm sure he can cut through Vincent's somewhat easily.

This was adorable. Thank you for writing. <3

sinnatious September 3 2014, 06:07:19 UTC

Cloud's earned his makeout session, dammit. :P

Thank you for reading!

darknefarious September 3 2014, 06:20:40 UTC

I'm so happy to be able to find a really good Vincent/Cloud story with a happy ending and without the angst!! Thank you so much ;)

sinnatious September 5 2014, 06:25:04 UTC

You're very welcome, thank you for reading!

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sinnatious September 5 2014, 06:25:52 UTC

Hey! Thank you heaps, I work very hard on dialogue so it's always great to hear when it pays off for people.

Love your avatar by the way.

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sinnatious September 6 2014, 03:43:13 UTC

I don't script dialogue at all, I just write it as I go.

verseidious September 4 2014, 16:13:54 UTC

Oh man, leaving Cloud in a cave with Malboros in it. All the ways that could have gone horrifically for him...

Anyways, I rather loved the cracky silliness of this fic, especially since it helped cheer me up some during a few rough patches over the past couple of weeks.

sinnatious September 5 2014, 06:26:50 UTC

Glad to hear it could do that for you, writing it cheered me up a bit too. :) Nothing quite like the escapism of fanfiction.

ratzels September 5 2014, 03:01:36 UTC

I could have sworn I commented yesterday...

Anyway, while it's a bad idea to reward Shelke for her poor behavior, I do so love the mopey boys getting their happyfuntimes. :D

Very sweet, thanks for writing!

sinnatious September 5 2014, 06:28:05 UTC

Maybe you forgot to hit post? That's happened to me before too. Thank you for commenting today!

So starts a lifelong problem of behavioural issues for Shelke. XD