The Fifth Act, Chapter 7

Nov 22, 2009 15:26

Title: The Fifth Act

Rating: T for violence.

Summary: FFVII Time-travel. Gen. Cloud has an accident with a Time Materia.

Author's Note: This was a fun chapter to write.

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act v, final fantasy, time travel, longfic, fanfiction

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kiriana November 23 2009, 02:39:08 UTC
Little Cloud is adorable! Wanna squish him.

Aerith and Zack finally meet! XD

I also can't wait to see Vincent. ^_^

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amberos November 23 2009, 06:49:50 UTC
wooha, watch out for that cliff hanger. I just love how the story focuses on the details, that the best part about sinnatious's stories.

keep up the fabbulouss updates.

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sinnatious November 23 2009, 10:44:11 UTC
Thank you! I'll do my best!

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aschenhimmel September 2 2010, 15:08:04 UTC
First of all, let me fan-gush:

OMG ZACK POV!!!!

(My avatar practically assures people of my Zack-fangirlism XD)

It's fun to write for you, and it sure is fun for me to read. Two Clouds! The contrast is so jarring, but I can't help but feel for that little boy who just wants to be special...and his alternate timeline version who got a bit too special for his own good.

And Zack's here! I'm seriously hoping he and older!Cloud would meet...sort of like...a reversal of roles in the original? XD

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Always awesome anonymous December 7 2010, 04:27:18 UTC
I remember reading and waiting with anticipation for your next release, even though I know whats gonna happen I still really truly enjoy you work and must once again suggest you write a book or something.
And you make Zack the way I always saw him, and for that nice stroll down memory lane I thank you

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caterfree10 January 3 2012, 02:24:19 UTC
YEY DOUBLE DOSE OF CLOUD. <3 Bitty!Cloud is adorable and seeing the two versions of Cloud interact is very intriguing to me. I also like the glimpse into how far reaching Cloud's actions already are that we get in the interaction between the two.

Also, the Zerith bit at the end~ <33333

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