The Fifth Act, Chapter 17

[sinnatious]

Title: The Fifth Act

Rating: T for violence.

Summary: FFVII Time-travel. Gen. Cloud has an accident with a Time Materia.

Author's Note:  AT LAST, I AM ON HOLIDAYS.  The best thing about Christmas has become time off!  :D

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[ixtey]

SO THAT'S WHY IT'S CALLED FIFTH ACT!... and to think I just wiki'd loveless a while ago, and thought nothing of it!

akshdhjasgdkj incoherent nao will comment decently-er after a good three minutes of verbal keysmash.

[ixtey]

Oh Genesis you poetic bastard you ♥ Cloud'll make his own Fifth Act, then... yes, I actually understand something! *dances* For some reason I can't come up with a decent review because all the words are turning blurry. Maybe I should get up from the computer once in a while. XD

Cloud finally reaching Second Class, and not wanting it... how sad. And what the hell is Tseng thinking?! I think he's thinking that Cloud's a serial killer that picked up somebody's PHS and plans to kill everybody whose number is written there. *hums twilight zone theme song*

I love how Sephiroth still manages to sound imposing even though he's doing "friendly talk". Non-scary wouldn't be the general's style, after all. :PP

[sinnatious]

Yes, I'm a pretentious git of a writer, you've figured it out. :P Ahaha, it was worth it for your reaction.

Perhaps not for this fic, but you've just stumbled across a potentially awesome idea for a mystery novel! :O

And I can't write Sephiroth without him being imposing. I tried it, but it wasn't Sephiroth anymore. >.o

[searisme]

I see someone had an eureka! moment (ixtey)... *heh* Mine was like that too, though maybe not so very bolded and large...

For today I am all out of adjectives - this chapter was, was too... yeah...

I see Seph still has a ways to go. Did nobody explain to him the use of given names? ...who would have, though...

And GenGen. So dramatic! And he would never draw his sword on Cloud. Never.
That last part was very shippy, though! And so very good, so very Genesis. I agree with him, somehow I don't think the watch the world burn thing really fits this saner, not quite so bitter Genesis.

[ixtey]

It wasn't supposed to be just big and bolded, it was also supposed to be sparkly. I has no sparkles no more, though. D: do you know of any site that generates sparkly text for LJ?

oh, and by the way, may I friend you? :D??

[searisme]

No sparkles? Well, that is simply shocking! Sadly I don't know of such a site... the only "enhancement" I regularily use is, after all, the ever useful cursive. (Unless ecessive exclamation points count.)

Go ahead. I'll friend you back. Though don't go waiting for actual journal updates, because, despite the annual attempt at resurrection, my journal remains well and truly dead.

[ixtey]

Yay, Thanks! It's alright with me, even if you don't update your journal. :PP

[fateofshadow]

I haven't slept in over 30 hours so I'm afraid my brain and typing speed are not up to par at the moment. Allow my icon to get my feelings across instead. (My god, this took my like 3 minutes to type...hands sooo slooowww.... u_u)

[sinnatious]

30 hours? Why are you here reading this and commenting! Go sleep! (Amazing icon, by the way, it's very eloquent. XD)

[aori_tsuki]

I can only give you a measly heart for now. So here!

♥

Haha, I find it horrible that I pay more attention to the little details in here, like Lazard sleeping after work, instead of enjoying the Sephiroth/Genesis interaction scenes.

[firedraygon97]

“This is fine, really. I’m…” he spent a moment searching for the right adjective. “…honoured.” Uncomfortable. Ashamed.

CLOUD. So modest. ♥ I also love how he and Angeal have a talk about future plans. Angeal does seem the type to counsel others on their longterm goals. He's so...fatherly, hahaha.

Sephiroth might be trying to make an attempt at civility, but it instead resembled a romp through a dragon’s nest.

SEPH. He's like a bull in a china store. Clearly he's read Zack's friendship manual -- subtlety is not emphasized anywhere in it. XP Like the analogy, too!

The most common cause for disconnected numbers is the death of the account holder.

Interesting. And how ironic, that the angsty reasoning in this case is wrong. (I just had to look up if I used ironic correct here, and I still don't understand, so I'm just going to blame it on the fact that it's 3 in the morning for me. =___=) Anyway, I adore it when logical, but outrageous, theories are made that are nowhere close to the truth. And guhh, I think I'm always weak for when

[firedraygon97]

*headdesk* Ixtey's the user, if it wasn't obvious. Don't know why my tag didn't work. ixtey?

[ixtey]

lol, maybe lj's just being wonky. XD

[searisme]

*hah* It's a conspiracy. My LJ is very tempramental tonight.