The Fifth Act, Chapter 24

[sinnatious]

Title: The Fifth Act

Rating: T for violence.

Summary: FFVII Time-travel. Gen. Cloud has an accident with a Time Materia.

Author's Note:  Heads up to the people I chat to online, internet has become crazy-temperamental and only gives brief ten-minute window connections before crapping out again, so I probably won't be available on chat very much

Comments

[mickeytheblue]

Man I've been waiting all day for this chapter!

My reaction: YES THE CHAPTER'S FINALLY UPLOADED!! *reads* WAAAGH! NUUUU!!!! CLOUD!!! UWAAGH!!! GWAAAH!!! SEPH! GEN! ZACK! HELP HIM! NOES!!!

(Can't make a proper comment right now cuz I'm leaving the house right at this moment.)

All I can say is this is an awesome chapter.

I shall be writhing in agony as I patiently wait for the next chapter XD Have fun in your travels!

[sinnatious]

XD Quite a rollercoaster there. <3 Thanks! Travels should be fun.

[fateofshadow]

*TwirlSpinSquee*

Thank you for updating, and just after I finished re-reading this story too! *Throws flowers and goes back to read chapter again*

[anonymous]

OH GOD WHY IS THAT CHAPTER JUST SO SAD AND :((((

jlsdkjhfdjkhkjdfhkjdf ixtey here just too lazy to log on

[daemoninwhite]

Once more it rolls around to Wednesday and I find myself stalking your page. AND THEN I ATE DINNER AND YOU UPDATED. :shakes fist:

But but but ... oh my god. THIS RESOLVES NOTHING. Are you secretly a writer for Lost? Because, seriously, it's like watching an episode of Lost. By the time you're finished, you've answered one question (how Angeal got him there), got half a dozen more (like, THE ENTIRE FU ... FIC. YES. FIC.), and you've got a strange craving for fish and chips and an even bigger distrust for QANTAS...

Love the end, with the little 'snapshots'. It's creepy, conveys Cloud's feelings sublimely, and above all else, IT MAKES ME CRAVE A NEW CHAPTER.

Seriously. I'll be Godzilla and you be Tokyo, kay?

[sinnatious]

My timing is awesome. :D

XD Lost! Surely I'm not that bad! Chapter 26 should answer a lot of questions. I just like to try and leave the mysteries for the end!

(*gives up on lj ascii art*)

[daemoninwhite]

So ... that means that chapter 25 will leave me in much the same situation? I LIE AWAKE AT NIGHT TRYING TO FIGURE OUT WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT. It's either annoying or awesome, I can't decide.

Nonetheless, in me, you have gained a stalker for life.

[sinnatious]

Oh no, Chapter 25 is much worse. >:3

♥ Can never have too many of those.

no less terrifying than the previous.

[demon_vampirate]

Oh god. Okay. That was just as scary as the last one, and leaves me with the same conclusion as the last one: Sephiroth is going to save Cloud.

Dammit.

Those "snapshots", especially-- been there, done that, it sucked.
Been in Angeal's position, too-- though not quite as blatantly at fault, I've recently put a friend in the hospital.

I did, however, love the little interlude of Sephiroth being annoyed at everybody and Genesis. That made this less terrifying than it could have been...

I wait impatiently for the next chapter and hope Cloud can be rescued soon.

[sinnatious]

Ack, apologies for making you relieve hospital experiences. Makes me wonder if I should have put some warnings more comprehensive than just 'violence'...

Interesting prediction! We'll see how that goes. :D

[demon_vampirate]

Hey, I'm the one that keeps coming back for more. (IT'S AN ADDICTION. [Damn, these school computers suck... stupid spacebar.])

AND THE ENDING TO LOVELESS. DAMMIT. I WANT TO KNOW. (I will never forget about that.)