The Fifth Act, Chapter 25

Jan 31, 2010 19:35

Title: The Fifth Act

Rating: T for violence.

Summary: FFVII Time-travel. Gen. Cloud has an accident with a Time Materia.

Author's Note:  Sorry for the wait, but I'm back now, and finally have a new chapter for you!  :D

That said, I'm thinking I need to reclaim some weekdays, so I might stick to just Sunday chapters for a while if people don't mind ( Read more... )

act v, final fantasy, time travel, longfic, fanfiction

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mickeytheblue January 31 2010, 11:02:44 UTC
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ITS HOOOOOJOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!

(Hey, that rhymes! XD)

Anyways, awesome chapter (as always)

I'm so glad that Gen and Seph finally decided to look for Cloud and Angeal themselves. (And Kunsel and Zack get to tag along too! YAY!)

Right now, I really really really really hate Angeal. I still sympathized with him in the past chapters cuz he's dying and he's desperate and all but now, I despise him. It's all HIS fault that Cloud's in trouble. okay, maybe I should blame Hollander too... BUT IT'S STILL ANGEAL'S FAULT! Cloud already got Aeris working on the freaking curing water for crying out loud! He should have just waited! Seriously! (sorry for the rant XP)

Speaking of Cloud...

Cloud's failed escape made me so devastated. He was so close to freedom... It was just so heart breaking >___and of course... HOOOOJOOOOO ( ... )

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sinnatious January 31 2010, 13:02:42 UTC
I knew there would be Angeal backlash, but I'm still surprised by the strength of it. XD

Thanks for your patience! I feel lousy for lengthening the standard time between chapters, but had to be realistic about the new year's rl committments. ^_^

(This is lame, but I have some sort of campy, terrible 'Nooooo, it's Hojoooooo' Disney villain-style song running through my head now XD)

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mickeytheblue January 31 2010, 13:27:44 UTC
Lol, that could actually sound like a disney villain song XD I kinda want to make lyrics...

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kaorismash January 31 2010, 13:28:55 UTC
:|

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sinnatious January 31 2010, 13:31:10 UTC
XD EPIC. That's maybe the biggest Tezukaface ever. :|

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kaorismash January 31 2010, 13:34:10 UTC
Oh lol I broke your page. Rightly so!

PUPPYYYYYY AND HIS SQUAAAAAATS KAJHG OH YOU SPOIL US SOOOOOOOOOO *_*

Zack had died for his freedom once! He would never let anyone take it away again! ;_______;

I refuse to comment on the terrible bits :| :| :| but oh man, look at all the fail that happens when everyone gets all secretive and don't tell the people they trust things they should because they believe it is better for the good of them all to not know. :|

OH SEPHY HE'S SO IN THE DARK BUT BEING SO VALIANT AND SMART. ♥ Adoring Zack to the extreme, GENESIS PULLING HIM BACK BY THE COLLAR OH MAN WRITE MORE ZACK PLEASE *_*

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sinnatious January 31 2010, 14:23:56 UTC
Hidden moral of the story: don't keep secrets? :|

OK, MORE ZACK, SURE THING. :D ♥♥♥

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fateofshadow January 31 2010, 14:50:08 UTC
*Does a spazzy little dance that looks like I'm trying to fly while walking on hot coals*

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSS!!! O____________O

Evil, evil, evil cliffhanger!

Kick him in the nuts, Cloud! Toss him about by his ponytail (but then wash your hands)! Tie him up and throw him to the chocobos!!! >_________<

GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! *Froths at mouth*

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fateofshadow January 31 2010, 15:34:07 UTC
Sadly he can't do any of that because he's pinned to the ground now D:
Then he'll probably get sedated and carried off to another lab. ad;kfajsdf poor cloud ;__;

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sinnatious February 1 2010, 12:32:34 UTC
*laughs* That's some brilliant imagery.

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:) anonymous January 31 2010, 15:09:12 UTC
HOJO! Run Cloud Run!

Can things really get any worse?!

lol at Lazard trying to be threatening. The tage team of Sephiroth, Genesis, Zack and Kunsel should be interesting to see. If Hojo actually manages to subdue Cloud, Sephiroth will skewer him! Of course, Genisis will be there to skewer Hollander! Speaking of which, Genesis' thought processes were good. I cant wait to see who he backs!

I loved it!

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Re: :) sinnatious February 1 2010, 12:33:17 UTC
Thanks!

Sure, things can always get worse. :D

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shewhoflies January 31 2010, 15:25:40 UTC
Right now, the only reaction I can drag up is eeeviiiiil. You're evil. This could be considered cruel and unusual punishment, you know.

(I want the next chapter. No, wait, I want the chapter where Cloud gets free. ;_;)

But wait... What the hell is Hojo doing in Hollander's lab?

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sinnatious February 1 2010, 12:33:40 UTC
What indeed.

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