The Fifth Act, Chapter 30

[sinnatious]

Title: The Fifth Act

Rating: T for violence.

Summary: FFVII Time-travel. Gen. Cloud has an accident with a Time Materia.

Author's Note:  FFXIII comes out this week!  Anybody remember how I sort of vanished off the net for a while after FFXII came out?  Yeah, maybe should expect that again.  Chapters should still be coming out on Sundays, though.  I

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[anonymous]

Ahh, have been about a day or two without sleep, so fic is not making much sense in my head. I guess I'll just read it again a little later on. Ixtey here, waiting for lj to email me since I forgot my password. >___>

[teekoness]

Cloud better escape soon because if Seph tries to rescue him.........................................

Sephiroth might get turned into a MOMMA'S BOY.

[teekoness]

You know sometimes I wish I could make myself NOT for updates on fic I like so I'd be able to read more chapters at once

[sinnatious]

Ha ha, I like to hoard chapters too, but the self-discipline part is indeed difficult. ^_^;

Yes, I do fear we all want the Turks to be good guys - it's pretty common! Although in fairness, it's a more recent phenomenon in fanfic brought on by their roles in Crisis Core and Advent Children.

You are much too generous with your words, thank you. Hopefully the remaining chapters will not disappoint.

[teekoness]

I think people forget that by AC, Rufus is the one who has changed not the Turks.

Do they like said change? Perhaps. Tseng especially strikes me as someone with a conscience. This being said, it won't stop him from tying it up and locking it in the truck of his car... and then sending aforementioned car off a bridge into deep, deep water.

[teekoness]

You are much too generous with your words, thank you. Hopefully the remaining chapters will not disappoint.

Not really. Believe it or not, I'm a really picky reader.

[kaorismash]

jklkajlkkl;asjgkljag idk what to saaaaaaaaay

Or or, i do, but there is too muuuuch.

I like that this chapter is, not exactly tying up all the loose ends, but THINGS ARE COMING TOGETHER. Connections are being made, and you are still torturing us with Hojo but lines are converging! *_*

I am unsurprised with Kunsel, though I was with Vincent, or rather, the way you chose to reintroduce him into the story. :D BUT AW MAN VINCENT. I :(( at his lack of trust for Cloud, but then I *__* at his concern over Sephiroth. THEY WILL HAVE A WONDERFUL RELATIONSHIP PLEASE? :3

Andand EVERYTHING. The cure and Jenova and holy shit if Jenova is there--! I do hope Hojo does not do ridiculous things concerning Jenova cells and remains focused on the timejumping thing. Because five months of that is more than enough without Jenova in the picture

[sinnatious]

Things are coming together! A little more slowly than normal, but yay, this is my favourite part of writing longfic. :3

Ha ha, you totally did see the Kunsel thing coming, I am not surprised, you know how I think. ♥ THIS IS WHY I CANNOT EVEN GIVE YOU HINTS WHEN YOU ASK.

Oh? How were you thinking Vincent would return? I had another idea originally, so I'm curious as to your speculation.

Zack is so fun to write, seriously, all of his scenes are lightning-quick compared to everyone else. Zack writes himself. *___* (Also his character is so bittersweet tragic, lasdfjlasj, I have a weak spot for the happy tragic cases).

That's the Turks for you, forever inhabiting the grey zone. :| Sometimes even after it's over you're not sure whose side they were on.

[kaorismash]

That's perhaps my favorite part of reading longfic. *_* The time where realizations start to hit you (or should) and THERE IS AN END IN SIGHT. NOT THAT I CAN HAZARD MUCH OF AN ENDING RIGHT NOW BESIDES: JENOVA WILL BE DESTROYED. HOJO WILL DIE. CLOUD WILL BE SHINY. :D I am unsure what you will be doing with Sephiroth with regards to Jenova because it cannot simply be as easy as HE NEVER GETS INSANE :D right. :( :D? I mean if he does find out the truth, he really has no right to go batshit if Genesis hasn't. Though um. Angeal. Also, CAN THIS ALL REALLY BE COVERED IN A FEW CHAPTER? :O? SHOULD I NOT BE OPTIMISTIC? D

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[skedaddle_san]

Great job in writing this up at the moment--it's so well-written. j-j

[basilton]

I have worked out Hojo's evil plan! Using the materia to jump forward in time so he doesn't have to wait while fics update! Devious! XD

[sinnatious]

XD Never has Trowa twirling a moustache icon been so incredibly appropriate.