The Fifth Act, Chapter 36

[sinnatious]

Title: The Fifth Act

Rating: T for violence.

Summary: FFVII Time-travel. Gen. Cloud has an accident with a Time Materia.

Author's Note:  I've reached that stage of a fic where I get insecure and second-guess every single paragraph, so I have absolutely no idea if this chapter is ready for people's eyes or not.  As always, please feel free to point

Comments

[reighost]

I love it!

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WHEEE!!! thank you for updating it was a pleasure to read thankyouthankyouthankyou.

and now i will fall out of my chair and roll around until i get to read the next chapter!

[mickeytheblue]

OMG Sephiroth is SANE!

But Cloud! Oh noooes, I'm so sure that the planet's not the one
talking to him. IT HAS TO BE JENOVA since Sephiroth is now a
threat to her and all and she needs Cloud to kill him. Plus Cloud's eyes! Although this is just a theory... Man, I'm in panic mode now, thinking of what could happen next >_<

Anyways... I just loved the fact that Zack just ran into the burning mansion (It's soooo like him to do that, since he did that too in Crisis Core.) and I love how Genesis called him an idiot for that ^_^

Angeal! I felt bad that he was defenseless since he gave up the buster sword. >___<

aaawww... I can't believe there are only 2 more chapters left. I'm gonna miss refreshing the page, waiting for the next chapter. :-(

[sinnatious]

Can't imagine why you'd miss sitting there refreshing a page! You could always just track anything uploaded here with the 'act v' tag to save yourself some trouble?

[skedaddle_san]

What is this? I don't even...

You're an evil, evil person leaving a cliffhanger like that, but I guess I can't really blame you since it fits into the story somehow. >.>
Weee! You're too good at writing. *sends you an evil look*

I can't wait for the next chapter. >:D

[sinnatious]

I think I speak for us all when I say: Mwa ha ha ha!

You're right, I shouldn't enjoy cliffhangers so much, I just want to make sure people keep coming back for more chapters. :3 It's selfish, I know.

[fateofshadow]

My brain broke.

WHHEEEEEEEEEEEEEE, SOMEONE SAVE SEPHY AND CLOUD FROM THEMSELVES!!!!! O_O (and make them have hot monkey sex while they're at it >_>)

[ixtey]

I totally second the hot monkey sex part. :))

[silvershadowkit]

Okay, first you drop the bomb that there's only two chapters left, and then you give us this? So not cool!! But at least it's a good chapter, but some confusion on my part.
Sephiroth isn't insane? Then why just randomly burn the mansion without telling the others? He knows that Cloud is from another timeline, but he just wants to know what he did to Cloud? Somehow I thought he would be more curious.
And is Cloud the one who is under Jenova's control now? Did Hojo give him more cells and mess with him even more, because I'm pretty sure that Cloud knows not to listen to Jenova, unless he's really messed up from being unconscious.
Either way, give us more soon, lest my mind goes crazy during the week before finals!

[sinnatious]

Rest assured all of your questions will be dealt with in due course. ^_^ Considering there are only two chapters remaining, in almost no time at all, really. A lot kinder than not explaining how exactly the time travel worked for twenty odd chapters, yes? :) Don't go crazy! (And good luck on finals!)