I'm normally such a wimp about writing angst, too! :( It gets better, at least. I think I would have stroked out if I hadn't at least sort-of fixed it by the end.
Gerard overthinks so much shit, it’s kinda ridiculously precious.
Frank and his fucking tiara power, and Bob playing the girl ( "Fuck you, my tits are hot,"), and I kinda really wish I had friends like these, lol.
Frank's clinging to his shoulders like he's some kind of boy-maiden and Gerard's a vampire and fuck, Gerard is seriously going to actually come in his pants. *hearts*
Gerard is kinda sex-stupid. I love awkward sex b/c it feels more realistic. And I have completely inappropriate reactions to your writing, b/c I don’t think hearteyes are the correct response to Gerard being awkward and faily, but that’s totally, totally the reaction I have.
Gerard is ridiculously adorable in his thoughts towards Frank, and his thoughts about wanting to find someone special.
Oh Frank. Getting beat up and stuffed in a locker, and being forced to stay there b/c apparently the janitor thinks a paint spill is more urgent than a kid being stuck inside a locker.
"You do, and you're just like the rest of them, because you think it'
( ... )
That's his superpower, even though he doesn't realize it. Overthinker Man! Who would even overthink his moniker. "I guess it isn't rhythmic enough-- it's not exactly poetic-- but how else could I phrase it?"
Some of my best memories of high school are tempered by this overwhelming sense of awkwardness. I had great friends, but we were all equally faily and ridiculous, and it makes all my memories of high school really mixed. I think that's part of why I love awkward sex -- it brings up that sort of mixture of nostalgia and embarrassment that most memories have for me. :D
This comment made my day, so thank you. Most excellent of you to write it.
Oh God, where do I start? I want to hold Gerard until the end of times or until he can finally gets a brain-mouth filter. Why would he said something that mean to Frank? Especially when he wants to have a thing-thing with him?
Also, I wish I would've come up with something as awesome as Project fucking Woo before I was taken; instead I just flirted (granted, it worked, but it definetely wasn't as cool).
And I know Mikey was just trying to help when he told Frank that Gerard wasn't looking for a thing, so of course Frank had to act like he didn't one a thing either, which has Gerard confused and hurting, which is probably why he was such an asshole to Frank, which broke Frank's heart (and mine, of course, since I'm a sucker for Frank). I'm telling you, it's true when they say that the road to hell is filled with good intentions.
Another amazing (although heartbreaking) chapter. You, my darling, are truly a writing genious.
omg bob is just the best bob! he is shruggy and cool with playing the npc's. girls and all. and "My parents said I can't go see my boyfriend if they hear about another fight," Bob says. *squeak*
aww, the locker scene killed me! Gerard is so go-go nuts for him and Frank doesnt even see, and noone sees that Frank is actually looking for something more than a hook-up. its sad.
but dude, Frank really have confusing signals...and boys are not the best to read them. lmao.
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Frank and his fucking tiara power, and Bob playing the girl ( "Fuck you, my tits are hot,"), and I kinda really wish I had friends like these, lol.
Frank's clinging to his shoulders like he's some kind of boy-maiden and Gerard's a vampire and fuck, Gerard is seriously going to actually come in his pants. *hearts*
Gerard is kinda sex-stupid. I love awkward sex b/c it feels more realistic. And I have completely inappropriate reactions to your writing, b/c I don’t think hearteyes are the correct response to Gerard being awkward and faily, but that’s totally, totally the reaction I have.
Gerard is ridiculously adorable in his thoughts towards Frank, and his thoughts about wanting to find someone special.
Oh Frank. Getting beat up and stuffed in a locker, and being forced to stay there b/c apparently the janitor thinks a paint spill is more urgent than a kid being stuck inside a locker.
"You do, and you're just like the rest of them, because you think it' ( ... )
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Some of my best memories of high school are tempered by this overwhelming sense of awkwardness. I had great friends, but we were all equally faily and ridiculous, and it makes all my memories of high school really mixed. I think that's part of why I love awkward sex -- it brings up that sort of mixture of nostalgia and embarrassment that most memories have for me. :D
This comment made my day, so thank you. Most excellent of you to write it.
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Also, I wish I would've come up with something as awesome as Project fucking Woo before I was taken; instead I just flirted (granted, it worked, but it definetely wasn't as cool).
And I know Mikey was just trying to help when he told Frank that Gerard wasn't looking for a thing, so of course Frank had to act like he didn't one a thing either, which has Gerard confused and hurting, which is probably why he was such an asshole to Frank, which broke Frank's heart (and mine, of course, since I'm a sucker for Frank). I'm telling you, it's true when they say that the road to hell is filled with good intentions.
Another amazing (although heartbreaking) chapter. You, my darling, are truly a writing genious.
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ugh. &all of them;
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Gerard is so go-go nuts for him and Frank doesnt even see, and noone sees that Frank is actually looking for something more than a hook-up. its sad.
but dude, Frank really have confusing signals...and boys are not the best to read them. lmao.
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