Fic: Psychically Yours. Used, Bert/Quinn, NC-17, 8300 words.

Aug 16, 2009 20:12

Psychically Yours
The Used, Bert/Quinn, NC-17, 8300 words

Quinn really doesn't want to work for the Psychic Agents Division, but that's before he meets his fellow employees. For evocatory in the usedfic exchange. Beta work by thesamefire and T. Any remaining mistakes are because I ignored their sound advice.

Warning: This could be read as having dub-con elements. Please ( Read more... )

used, bandslash, fic

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rufus August 17 2009, 01:08:15 UTC
oh man i love psychic detective stories, and this one is especially delicious. I especially like the group dynamics, and how you show Bert and Quinn's evolving partnership. (And also Jepha dumping the mental equivalent of a bucket of water over their heads, ahahahahaha.)

Also, I think this is my very favorite line: "You can't kick someone in the junk 'a little bit,'" Jepha points out.

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sinsense August 17 2009, 18:50:38 UTC
That is awesome! I love this type of story, too, and I was simultaneously really worried about writing it and really pumped to give it a shot. :D I'm glad that you liked it.

And there are no degrees of kicking someone in the junk! Bert is just wrong in real life on that score. :D Anyway, thank you so much.

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sinsense August 17 2009, 05:24:55 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it. ♥

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algernon_mouse August 17 2009, 02:05:52 UTC
*flails*

I love this so much. If you are ever bored, I would like you to write MORE. Like with Jepha. And possibly Bob Bryar. And with rimming. And weeping. God. I love weeping.

And you. I love you too.

*resumes flailing*

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sinsense August 17 2009, 05:22:12 UTC
BABY. I got your emails and was, like, okay-- maybe a little cheerfully choked up, because I am a giant nerd. :D ( ... )

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algernon_mouse August 17 2009, 14:00:48 UTC
No seriously, you have no idea how much I loved this. When it ended, I honest to God, howled NOOOOOO.

I like this idea of yours, and I encourage you to explore it further. Like possibly to the point where Bob's getting a blow job from Jepha, and Jepha fingers his ass to the point that Bob is torn between fucking Jepha's mouth, and twisting down onto Jepha's fingers. And somewhere in that indecision, Bob twists his hand into the back of Jepha's hair and just pulls. Jepha groans, and when he does his throat opens and Bob's dick slides all the way down ( ... )

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quatre_k August 17 2009, 02:09:20 UTC
OMG The Used are Psychic Detectives I fucking love it!

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sinsense August 17 2009, 05:01:10 UTC
Whoo! Thank you so much, I'm really glad you liked it.

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thesamefire August 17 2009, 02:15:50 UTC
Ooh, I really like what you did with Bert using the grudges! it both makes a lot of sense, and seems like a very Bert thing to do.

I also really liked the inevitability of Bert and Quinn getting together, the way it was jokingly foreshadowed by Jeph but also just a very natural culmination of their surprise compatibility -- I found it to be a most excellent AU translation of their RL relationship.

Also, I would be interested in any and all further thoughts you have on how Bert's psychic abilities affect Quinn while they're doin' it. It's so full of possibilities!

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sinsense August 17 2009, 04:57:01 UTC
Oh god, good. I went over that with T, but I was still a little worried. I fret about fanfiction, obviously. Because that's the smart thing!

That actually started to grow while I was writing, if that makes any sense; I was really writing a romp when I started the story, but (um, as per usual) it gained an element of meditation on the Ultimate Codependent Twins.

OH MY GOD. I have thought about this way too much. T suggested a kind of D/s context, and I was running with it (but didn't have time to write it in)-- writing a situation where Quinn pins Bert to the floor, but Bert responds by making him focus entirely on getting Bert off, and by guiding him to do exactly what Bert wants. AND THEN, and then! Another time, Bert could pull Quinn into his mind, and Quinn just goes into sensory overload and passes out, and Bert thinks he's killed him with sex.

...I like psychic connection sex, at any rate. I might type these scenarios up and send them to you, is what I'm saying.

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