Psychically Yours
The Used, Bert/Quinn, NC-17, 8300 words
Quinn really doesn't want to work for the Psychic Agents Division, but that's before he meets his fellow employees. For
evocatory in the
usedfic exchange. Beta work by
thesamefire and T. Any remaining mistakes are because I ignored their sound advice.
Warning: This could be read as having dub-con elements. Please
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Also, I think this is my very favorite line: "You can't kick someone in the junk 'a little bit,'" Jepha points out.
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And there are no degrees of kicking someone in the junk! Bert is just wrong in real life on that score. :D Anyway, thank you so much.
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I love this so much. If you are ever bored, I would like you to write MORE. Like with Jepha. And possibly Bob Bryar. And with rimming. And weeping. God. I love weeping.
And you. I love you too.
*resumes flailing*
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I like this idea of yours, and I encourage you to explore it further. Like possibly to the point where Bob's getting a blow job from Jepha, and Jepha fingers his ass to the point that Bob is torn between fucking Jepha's mouth, and twisting down onto Jepha's fingers. And somewhere in that indecision, Bob twists his hand into the back of Jepha's hair and just pulls. Jepha groans, and when he does his throat opens and Bob's dick slides all the way down ( ... )
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I also really liked the inevitability of Bert and Quinn getting together, the way it was jokingly foreshadowed by Jeph but also just a very natural culmination of their surprise compatibility -- I found it to be a most excellent AU translation of their RL relationship.
Also, I would be interested in any and all further thoughts you have on how Bert's psychic abilities affect Quinn while they're doin' it. It's so full of possibilities!
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That actually started to grow while I was writing, if that makes any sense; I was really writing a romp when I started the story, but (um, as per usual) it gained an element of meditation on the Ultimate Codependent Twins.
OH MY GOD. I have thought about this way too much. T suggested a kind of D/s context, and I was running with it (but didn't have time to write it in)-- writing a situation where Quinn pins Bert to the floor, but Bert responds by making him focus entirely on getting Bert off, and by guiding him to do exactly what Bert wants. AND THEN, and then! Another time, Bert could pull Quinn into his mind, and Quinn just goes into sensory overload and passes out, and Bert thinks he's killed him with sex.
...I like psychic connection sex, at any rate. I might type these scenarios up and send them to you, is what I'm saying.
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