Wah, this is so wonderful...though I'm hoping to see part 3 out sometime in the next day or so. I still love the way you write people, and I'm glad you're posting what you finished.
I know that you're not writing any more at this point, but if you have an outline for the resolution of the HiyoMari plotline, could you post that? Assuming that you don't have it finished completely.
Hee! Loved the whole family flaking out on him at the end there. Too cute!
And is it just me, or is EVERYONE conspiring to get Mari with Hiyo, whether they realise it or not? Atobe's suggesting she call him was... curious. *evil grin*
*laugh* Well... at least Mari can't claim that the evil is just hers? She had help... *grin* And hey, I always thought it made sense that if Kabaji's talent were mimicry, he must TOTALLY own at DDR. *snicker*
*chuckle* No-one recognizes Jirou's older brother, which kind of amuses me--physically, he's a copy of the main character from a shounen ai manga series that's famous in Japan but unheard-of in the States. *grin* Still, the idea of a sleepy twenty-year-old amuses me.
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I love Jirou. And his family. CANNOT WAIT TO MEET HIS PARENTS.
Atobe is adorable when he's not causing Jirou pain. Pooft.
♥ Seiichirou. Nice aniki! I have a nice aniki TOO!
I still love Mari. Hmm....WHY WASN'T HIYOSHI AT THE PARTY?
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I know that you're not writing any more at this point, but if you have an outline for the resolution of the HiyoMari plotline, could you post that? Assuming that you don't have it finished completely.
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And I can't wait to see the rest of the Hiyo/Mari 'Coping Methods' Arc too ^^
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And is it just me, or is EVERYONE conspiring to get Mari with Hiyo, whether they realise it or not? Atobe's suggesting she call him was... curious. *evil grin*
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I wish someone coulda given Atobe a couple of love taps that would have ruffled his feathers a looong time ago.
LoL Kabaji's pwning at DDR... Why am I not surprised? lol Kabaji must have a bajilion skills that seem unlikely but he posesses. ^^
How very astute Jirou's siblings are... ^_^ muwahahahaha And I can't believe they're all napping! ^_^
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*chuckle* No-one recognizes Jirou's older brother, which kind of amuses me--physically, he's a copy of the main character from a shounen ai manga series that's famous in Japan but unheard-of in the States. *grin* Still, the idea of a sleepy twenty-year-old amuses me.
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