FMP: One-Shot: Hakuhei Shugi (Close Quarters)

Apr 22, 2007 16:19

Title: Hakuhei Shugi (Close Quarters ( Read more... )

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sinsofwill April 28 2007, 03:45:31 UTC
Historiography of Ancient Sparta in twenty pages? O_O Good gracious. I'd almost rather have endo and immuno...

Thank you for commenting! I'm so happy that you enjoyed it, and that it helped perk you up after your history marathon. ^_^

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blankbullets April 25 2007, 06:48:51 UTC
EEE! please say you'll keep running with this. its so perfectly sousuke. thanks for the story!!

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sinsofwill April 28 2007, 03:42:47 UTC
*laugh!* Thank you for the comment! I had a blast writing it. I don't know if there'll be more in this same vein--funny's not something I normally do, unfortunately--but there definitely will be more FMP. Thanks again! ^^

Just randomly--Mar-ee-chris? Let me guess: Filipino?

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nessataleweaver April 27 2007, 17:18:25 UTC
*rolls on the floor, kicking her feet in the air in delight.*

Interesting point about why Sousuke doesn't react to Kaname's bikini - I never would have thought of that - but it's perfectly logical. Well. Sousuke-logical. I have to say, though, I think they would have moved a bit closer to intimacy by now. But, author's discretion. And this wouldn't have been so funny, otherwise.

But oh, this is so... so... them. And GOOD! There's not enough FMP fanfic out there - and not nearly enough good FMP fanfic out there. How nice of you to help fill in the gap!

May I friend you, BTW?

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sinsofwill April 28 2007, 02:33:18 UTC
Oh, goodness. *blush* Such praise. Thank you for taking the time to comment!

I totally agree with you: in a less silly story, I really hope that they'd have moved a bit closer to intimacy by then! *laugh* But then, in a less farcical world... I doubt that Sousuke would have needed a second try at a bra. They're not really that difficult... I think. ^^; I'm so happy you enjoyed it, though--I don't normally write silly stories, but darn, this one was fun!

If you can believe it, the bikini logic occurred to me in the middle of last week's endocrinology lecture. About sex hormones. No joke. And yes, there is a rather awful story on my hard drive whose inspiration came from the topic of that lecture, too. *winces* Besides--Sousuke might be oblivious, but his eyeballs work just fine. Even I thought Chidori cleaned up pretty darned nicely in a bikini. There had to be some kind of reason he wasn't even looking ( ... )

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del.icio.ed! egelantier August 5 2007, 12:02:52 UTC
such a great story - so hot, and sweet, and achingly in character without going overboard farsical - God, it's so hard to find good FMP fanfiction, and yours is so perfect. also, did I mention hot? hot.
thanks!

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