PoT: PWP: Ration

May 28, 2007 12:15

Title: 分(Ration)
Pairing: Silver Pair
Series: Prince of Tennis
Disclaimer: ...ehehehe...
Rating: ...there were four entries to the smut meme, and this was the second.
Notes: this one was pretty long already, so there was editing, but very little adding. ^^; And also, I feel as if I failed on the ice cream, but, well, we try.

分(Ration) )

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mousapelli May 28 2007, 18:49:15 UTC
eeeeeeeeeee

I just can't tell you how happy new Silver Pair from you makes me, especially some this hot. ESPECIALLY explicitly reversi silver pair *bulletproof kink*

Shishido's voice was deep and throaty and... amused. "Where d'you think you're going?"
I love how Ohtori can't quite keep up with Shishido's train of thought, or anybody's, when Shishido is making suggestions and grabby hands.

in doing so, whacked his head on the roof of the car.
mid-sex violence always cracks me up for some reason XD

"I was fifteen, and I was being dumb and macho."
This is so adorable. I can just picture Shishido's face, made all the grumpier because he actually enjoyed it and doesn't want anybody to know.

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sinsofwill May 29 2007, 13:30:12 UTC
Eee! *squished with happiness* I'm so glad you liked it... especially since my recent kick for swappable Silver Pair is definitely your doing. ^^

Seriously. I saw the car sex request, trotted down to give my Civic a very dubious look, thought of how tall Ootori was... and thought, "Oh, what the heck, if Shishido's feeling frisky enough to jump him in a car, he's definitely feeling frisky enough to give up some macho." Which is not a thought I would have had before reading your fics. *laugh* It was totally a "What would mousapelli do?" moment.

*snickers* And while I am not male and therefore not cursed/blessed with such anatomy, I'm imagining that most guys do have a hard time following other their significant other's train of thought when said S-O has grabby hands. Even when they're as controlled and sane as Ootori seems to think he is. Silly boy. *pats him*

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mousapelli May 29 2007, 20:43:13 UTC
my recent kick for swappable Silver Pair is definitely your doing.
*ENCOURAGES*

I think there should be 'WWMD?' wristbands, and the answer would always be "write reversi silver pair."

Actually, i had to admit, half of my amusement stemmed from the idea of them tooling around in Shishido's mother's car even before they got to the friskiness. It'd not like Shishido probably had too much macho left at that point...

Man, I need to write some more swappable silver pair, because it is hot like the sun.

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sinsofwill May 29 2007, 21:45:57 UTC
half of my amusement stemmed from the idea of them tooling around in Shishido's mother's car even before they got to the friskiness.
*thinks about that*
BWAHAHAHAHA! Oh, my goodness, you're right. Man, my subconscious needs a serious swift kick in the arse. *laugh*

Well, though they are high schoolers, and the price of maintaining a car in Japan is ridiculously high. Besides, even if they were uni students, there's a trend now in Japan where uni-aged kids and young professionals are living at home with their parents rather than going out into the world--it's called being a "parasite single." Yeah. No joke.
...*is now snickering at the idea of university-aged Shishido and Ootori STILL sneaking smuttily around behind their parents' backs...*

Man, I need to write some more swappable silver pair, because it is hot like the sun.

To steal your words... *ENCOURAGES!!*

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leira May 28 2007, 23:20:33 UTC
Oh that was delightful. X33333

But he heard himself whisper "...yes, please," all the same.

This line makes me giggle like mad. X3 Oh Ootori~ ♥

I really love your fanfiction, you write so well. X3

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sinsofwill May 29 2007, 13:32:27 UTC
*winks* Ootori, I think, is just as much of a hormonal boy as Shishido is. Even if it does call for incredibly awkward car sex. ^_~

I'm so happy you enjoyed it! ^_^ Thank you~!

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ponta_chan May 29 2007, 04:58:52 UTC
Waaaaai~!!!! *glomps* Thank you so much. So it was you who replied to my request! ILU~ ♥♥♥♥♥ My basis for the kink was Boku no Pico.. but yours was definitely way better.

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sinsofwill May 29 2007, 12:59:55 UTC
OH MY GOD, it's ANOTHER FILIPINO! *cough* Not like I immediately went to look at your LJ or anything... (Sorry. ^^; I always do--I've been out of the fandom for so long I barely know anyone anymore. *laugh*)

...that's so bizarre, though--for two years, I was the only Pinay in the fandom... and now all of a sudden there's you and hvid_noire! *flailing wildly* And they have YAOI CONVENTIONS in Manila now?! WHY did I move?!

...okay, okay, I'm calm. ^^; And of course you're very welcome! Thank you for making it--I had a ton of fun writing it, and it makes me unbelievably happy that you enjoyed it. ^^ And ahhh, that explains the carsex--I imagine it works logistically much better with shota than with a pair of obscenely tall adolescent males. (Well, not that smut and logistics are exactly good friends. ^_~)

May I friend you? I get very homesick sometimes, and it's great to hear fannish news from home. ^^;

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ponta_chan May 29 2007, 17:22:20 UTC
Wow~ *___* So you're a Filipino, too. I was surprised when I saw that you added me. Friended you, too, of course. ^_______^

Ahaha. Yeah, expect me to always be the last one to hear the great news. -_-' I wish I discovered them the same time as most of you guys did, really. (I'm kind of saddened by the thought that I missed this certain Silver Pair writer cos she left the fandom before I even got to appreciate these lovely guys.. and nobody's saved her works)

Ah.. so.. You might want to check them out? *grins* Some pics of yaoi cosplayers from last Saturday's yaoi con. XD

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sinsofwill May 29 2007, 21:13:09 UTC
I guess you can call me a lapsed Filipina--I moved to the US for college when I was eighteen, and I've been here ever since... only get to go back home for vacations. And it's been years since I spoke Tagalog with anyone who wasn't in my family. ;_;

*laugh* Well, I was in the fandom back in 2003-2004... and then I left, and now I'm back again, so I "discovered" them quite a long time ago, and there's been a lot of interim stuff in the meantime.

What Silver Pair writer are you referring to? I might know who she is and where to find her works, if she was around in my time period.

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gekkonorondo May 29 2007, 20:27:55 UTC
I actually love you.

So many moments of this made me laugh my ass off, and I'm so happy that I finally had the time to sit down and finish reading it.

Thank you very much for entertaining me on this not so entertaining afternoon. :3

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sinsofwill May 29 2007, 21:54:02 UTC
While I'm sorry that your afternoon was not-so-entertaining, I'm immensely flattered that you were entertained by my silly little ficlet despite it! ^_^ And I'm really happy that it made you laugh--thank you very much! ^___^

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serenia May 29 2007, 20:32:52 UTC
Mmm, this is a wonderful start to my morning - thankyou! :)

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sinsofwill May 29 2007, 21:52:10 UTC
*laugh* No, thank you! ^_^

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