PoT: PWP: Time

[sinsofwill]

Title: 刻 (Time)
Pairing: Silver Pair
Series: Prince of Tennis
Disclaimer: ....nope.
Rating: Entry three to a smut meme. Yup.
Notes: Yet another stupidly long one. No wonder I fail at anonymity.

Comments

[mousapelli]

oh god, so hot *_*

psst, two things:

He'd been so close to the edge so many rimes
times?

Choutarou, you've got another thing coming."
think! I do that one all the damned time.

Shishido blowjob = omfg HOT.

[sinsofwill]

Ack! Thank you for pointing those out to me--I find it impossibly hard to correct my own smut. <--blushes too hard to see straight. And darn it! I made that 'rimes' mistake the first time, and then corrected it, and then lost that log and forgot to correct it a second time! *laugh*

...*blinks at second correction* Hmmm. Perhaps my ESL is kicking in... I'm not entirely sure what's wrong with it. Just to be safe, I decided to change the sentence--clarity, clarity, clarity. ^_~

*chuckles* I see Shishido as the kind of guy who'd be really good at blowjobs... though for the life of me, I could not tell you why. *laugh* Thank you so much, dear! ^_^

[mousapelli]

I have a terrible time proof-reading smut, because usually i'm so sick of writing it by the time i am done that I cannot read it any more. So then when i read back through later there are all kinds of crazy things...

You mean you weren't sure what I was telling you to fix? The phrase is "you've got another think coming." As in, you should think again. I'm forever typoing think as thing.

Are you ESL? Really? I would have never guessed, you write just beautifully.

[sinsofwill]

Really?! I really WAS having an ESL moment, then--I always thought that the phrase was "you've got another THING coming," as in, there's something that you're not thinking of coming your way! *laughing*

Yes, I'm ESL... though I've been told that people can't tell, which is always very flattering. ^_^ But it makes my occasional "Er?" moments all the more awkward when they happen.

[vampy18]

I hoped a lot that you decided to come out... I knew that you wrote it, because I saw your first post, when you forgot to log out...
Hello, I was the anon-san XD
I really want let you know that I was totally obsessed with this fanfiction for about 4 days... I read it 8 times XDDDD
And every time I found it incredible exciting and ....perfect. That was more more more more and more better than what I expected from the request...
You totally center my biggest erotic dream about silver pair XDDD
But I totally love how you characterized them!
""No, he wasn't going to die. He was going to kill him."" That was my favorite sentence.
After it I started to read the fanfictions in your lj, I think all of those are fantastic!!
Thank you again for your work!!!

[sinsofwill]

Not at all--thank you so much!

Yeah, I know I forgot to post as an anon. ^^; And apparently everyone who had it "tagged" had it sent to them. Whoopsies... ^^; But I'm so glad that you enjoyed it--that link that you put in was very helpful, too. I'd figured out what orgasm control was, but the wiki article gave me some good ideas (mwahahaha!) Thank you so much, dear!