PoT: PWP: Kahan (Seal)

[sinsofwill]

Title: Kahan (Seal)
Pairing: Silver Pair
Fandom: Prince of Tennis
Rating: This might not have been written for a smut meme... but it might actually be smuttier. Little children bewaaaare. *snrk*
For: rageboxalice, who wanted a sequel to 判 (Signature), and for mousapelli. Because, yes, reversi Silver Pair actually is as hot as the sun

Comments

[mousapelli]

I really cannot tell you the feeling of "EEEEEEE" it gives me to see you mention me in relation to you writing Silver Pair fic. I suppose it's because you weren't around to talk to, so it made you seem kind of above me level while i was reading the roommates arc over and over.

the twist top twirling off the side of the bed to the gods only knew where.
I love that we are in completely agreement that Shishido is a loser of lube caps. YOU KNOW HE IS.

God, this is hot and perfect and sweet, and possessive grabby Ohtori is so freaking hot when it happens, more than half because he tries to be so normal most of the time, that it all sort of explodes eventually. And the way they push each other's buttons never fails to make me shiver with glee.

Have fun while you're missing~!

[sinsofwill]

I'm always so amused by the way silence can do things like that--especially since I was voted "Most Approachable" and "Sugar Sweet" in my high school! *giggles* But I cannot tell a lie--if it hadn't been for you, the thought of the Silver Pair swapping off wouldn't have even occurred to me. *laugh* Though I've always been curious--I don't think I've ever read a story of yours where Shishido tops. *nudge? nudge?* ^_

[mousapelli]

Shishido tops during So Much For the Afterglo, which is appropriate since the whole setup is shamefully borrowed from you *coughs*

but you're write, I tend to write it the other way, just because I read so much fic where Shishido tops always, and because it's kind assumed that it is that way most of the time.

lol, i think the being lubed overnight by accident needs to completely make it into a fic.

Shishitori! *_* *votes so much yes*

[sinsofwill]

*eyes bug out* *runs off to read it again* *wipes drool off her chin* Oh, man. There's no way I'd have been able to forget Ootori being an incredibly eager, begging uke, and Shishido wanting to be romantic and soulful and instead caving like a Jenga tower. (I don't know why him being a little out of control poinks my kinks, but it always does. *laugh*)I don't know how it happened that I didn't know that was ShishiTori. *is ashamed of self!*

...oh, wait, yes, I do, I started reading it on a school computer, then stopped when I got to the smut to fangirl at you. Because there was no way I was going to be able read your smut in the computer lab and not start sweating. *much sheepishness*

*laugh!* That's hilarious, actually--the vast majority of the NC-17 fics that I've read, other than miko-no-da's, are ToriShishi! You and I totally have our fandom wires crossed, lady! *giggles* Not that I mind--heck, a lot of it is sexy as anything!--but man, there are days I'd kill for some ShishiTori smut. (Oh, well, at least now I have one of your stories to

[serenia]

I caught myself wondering if maybe you were a gay man in a past life - reading this is almost like being there! And if this is what it's really like, I want to be a gay man in my next life. XD

... yes, my brain is strange.

[sinsofwill]

*LAUGH!* Or perhaps it's me, because you're not the first person who's said a similar thing! *laugh* Well, the one advantage of writing for a predominantly female audience--who's to tell me that this isn't what it's like? Not like any of us will ever find out firsthand... *snickers*

Ironically, I did have three gay male roommates in college--one who was reserved, one who shared now and again, and one whom we called Tim rather than Tom, because everything he said was TMI! TMI! *cough* Well, it was good... research, I guess?

[angel_katchan]

Wow, that was....wow. I mean, I can't believe I forgot how well you could write PWP fics. This is just, Wow!

Though Ohotri as seme is good, I much prefer Shishido. He has the attitude for it, but this was AMAZING!!!!!

And I'm now wanting to read about Atobe walking in on Gakuto and Oshitari. And did Atobe join them before he gave them laps?

[sinsofwill]

*laugh* It's been a long time since I wrote a PWP--darn it, they're hard! But I'm so glad that you enjoyed it all the same--thank you!

I'm with you, actually--I'm a bigger fan of ShishiTori rather than ToriShishi--not necessarily because Ootori's not a guy, but because Shishido strikes me as the type who'd want to be top, and Ootori strikes me as the type who'd let him. But hey, they're partners, they can be *cough* open-minded now and again. ^_~

And did Atobe join them before he gave them laps?

*sputters with laughter*
*thinks about it*
Nah, I don't think Atobe wants his body parts anywhere near Gakuto. He's pretty sure Gakuto bites. ^_~ If he walked in on the Silver Pair, on the other hand... *is shot*

[angel_katchan]

But Atobe walking in on Shishido and Ohtori is possible. I mean, maybe Shishido didn't want to wait to get home one day and then were in the clubhouse a la Oshitari and Gakuto, and Atobe walked in and he was like "Damn!" and jumps in. And then they have hot shower sex! right? It could happen.

He's pretty sure Gakuto bites but if he bit Atobe, then Yuushi would punish Gakuto. Unless that's what Gakuto wanted, so he would bite Atobe.

[sinsofwill]

*laugh!* What I love most about PoT? The fact that anything could happen.
...though I envision Shishido just reflexively throwing a shampoo bottle at Atobe and Ootori squawking and covering up at light speed. Pity, because, hey, Silver Pair smut is hot, and I couldn't blame Atobe if he wanted to join in. *_*
Evil Smut Brain: Well, but if they could be eased into the idea...
Monnie: *thwaps the Evil Smut Brain* No. No threesome smut. It's hard enough to manage the pronouns when there are two penises in the mix!

*snicker* Oh, certainly, Gakuto would bite Atobe, and he'd adore being punished for it.
...the question, however, is that I think Atobe doesn't want to get bitten by Gakuto. He's firmly convinced that Gacchan has something contagious. Probably rabies. Or syphilis. It'd explain a lot.
(Yes, I'm just being silly. ^_~)

[kc_evans]

You have such a lovely way of paying attention to such fine detail while not bogging the story down with too many facts or information that it is amazing. I am always awed by writers who can strike a balance between such a delicate line and can describe the scenery so well I almost feel like a voyeur. :P I have the sad tendency to skim rather than read but your words invoked such powerful imagery that I could imagine everything that happened so well.

I'm also envious of how you're able to finish such long, long fics so quickly. It amazes me how people can write fast, barely look it over, and post such wonderful fics. What's your secret?

By the way, if none of this makes any sense, please forgive me. I think I'm half-asleep. Just got back from making jam and I'm exhausted.

[sinsofwill]

Ack! Thank you! *is blushing* I'm never sure what details are good and which are boggy, so it's awfully validating to be told that someone thinks that I managed to find a balance...

*laugh!* *blush* I don't know if it's wonderful, but... it always sort of amuses me that people consider my fics "long." The truth is, the very first story that I actually completed for submission to something was twenty pages, and I was eleven years old! I think the length is just a function of my writing style, to be honest--very little actually happens in my stories. ^^; <--but I have lots of fun writing them!

Oooh! Jam! *smiles* Thank you so much, dear!

[kisamonkey]

I'm glad I saved this until morning to read. I don't think I would've gotten to sleep if I hadn't. As it is, I'm trying not to squirm while responding. I love the way you write these two. I love the way that you include their reactions to each other as much as what they are actually doing. My gratitude for the person who asked for a sequel.

[sinsofwill]

*laugh* I'm glad you didn't feel that the process of being inside a character's head was excessive--I don't think I could write a PWP without including their reactions to each other. Such a fine line between what I consider me writing "honest, it can count as writing, really" and me admitting to being an outright perv. *laugh*

But thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it. ^^