Oh. this was so good and achy. It really was the right choice to have them just being friends, because it made Shishido's thoughts that much more powerful. It's so much more effective when he can't touch Ohtori, not just right at that moment, but not later either, not (in his mind at least) ever.
also the Oshitari cameo was perfect. he kills me.
this is not to say that you should write unrequited Silver Pair as opposed to requited, because rumpled ohtori where shishido could touch him? GODDAMN.
♥♥♥ you're amazing. Ohtori's hair! I just wanted to scrunch it XD
Eeee, thank you, sweetie! *happily scrunches Ootori's hair with you* I'm so happy you're not out to kill me--as you know, achy fic isn't normally my thing, but I guess I have to do it at least once for every married Doubles couple.
I don't know why Oshitari has been popping up in my head lately--he was the main character of the hetfic, too. o.O And yes, he kills me, too. ^^
I don't think that I should write unrequited SP forever, either! Oh, God, I can just see what the SiMH--Shishido in Monnie's Head--would say about that.
SiMH: *cracks knuckles* *examines fists* If I hit you hard enough, I'll knock some sense into you. Then you'll have to make my partner gay again.
Monnie: *points to him* See?
SiMH: *still talking* ...and then goddamn it, you'll let me top again...
(I'm sorry, it's 2AM, and I'm really loopy. This is the second time that SiMH has come out to yell at me this round of comment replies. Er, in any case... thank you again for the wonderful prompt!)
...okay, this is the third and last time Shishido-in-Monnie's-Head is going to come out to play, because him talking is a sign that I should not still be awake at 3AM.
SiMH: *looks at the plushie* *looks up* What the Hell am I supposed to do with this?!
Monnie: Well... choices, choices. You could give it to Mari, I suppose. I think she's asking for Silver Trio, personally.
SiMH: Silver... WHAT?! *drops the plushie* *starts cracking his knuckles* If that 'shroom gets anywhere near my Choutarou--
Monnie: --who, might I remind you, is straight--
SiMH: *ignoring Monnie* --I am going to bust him up so bad-- *continues snarling*
Monnie: Uh... *blinks slowly* Hiyo? What do you think?
Hiyoshi: *eyes Shishido* ...leave me out of this, please.
ER. Yes. *shoos the boys back into their little closet* In any case, I'm sorry for the broken heart, but delighted that you, er, enjoyed it? ^_~ Thank you, dear!
OMG!! What a lovely sad fic! Wonderfully written and I adore your Shishido to bits. XDD Shishido breaks my heart by being so accepting that Choutarou wont be his. *wibbles*
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*sniffles*
It was so sad~, yet strangely happy at the same time. Bittersweet?
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also the Oshitari cameo was perfect. he kills me.
this is not to say that you should write unrequited Silver Pair as opposed to requited, because rumpled ohtori where shishido could touch him? GODDAMN.
♥♥♥ you're amazing. Ohtori's hair! I just wanted to scrunch it XD
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I don't know why Oshitari has been popping up in my head lately--he was the main character of the hetfic, too. o.O And yes, he kills me, too. ^^
I don't think that I should write unrequited SP forever, either! Oh, God, I can just see what the SiMH--Shishido in Monnie's Head--would say about that.
SiMH: *cracks knuckles* *examines fists* If I hit you hard enough, I'll knock some sense into you. Then you'll have to make my partner gay again.
Monnie: *points to him* See?
SiMH: *still talking* ...and then goddamn it, you'll let me top again...
(I'm sorry, it's 2AM, and I'm really loopy. This is the second time that SiMH has come out to yell at me this round of comment replies. Er, in any case... thank you again for the wonderful prompt!)
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You're very, very... evil. ._____. Yes, evil. It was good but it was sad and... It broke my heart. T__________T
No love.
Yet lots of love at the same time.
Gah.
I wanna give Shishido a hug... ;__________;- -hands him a Hiyoshi plushie- That can tide him over for a bit...
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SiMH: *looks at the plushie* *looks up* What the Hell am I supposed to do with this?!
Monnie: Well... choices, choices. You could give it to Mari, I suppose. I think she's asking for Silver Trio, personally.
SiMH: Silver... WHAT?! *drops the plushie* *starts cracking his knuckles* If that 'shroom gets anywhere near my Choutarou--
Monnie: --who, might I remind you, is straight--
SiMH: *ignoring Monnie* --I am going to bust him up so bad-- *continues snarling*
Monnie: Uh... *blinks slowly* Hiyo? What do you think?
Hiyoshi: *eyes Shishido* ...leave me out of this, please.
ER. Yes. *shoos the boys back into their little closet* In any case, I'm sorry for the broken heart, but delighted that you, er, enjoyed it? ^_~ Thank you, dear!
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