Oh, very sweet :) I particularly liked the paragraph where you shift Vecchio's view on Kowalski: For the rest of the day, whenever Ray looked at the box lying on his desk, he didn't think about how he was so close to being able to drive his baby again. Instead, he kept thinking about Kowalski
I just love those turning moments in a story, and had you chosen to write 10,000 words of this instead, I would have loved to see you expand that next day they spent with each other into a week, or a month :)
I also very much liked the way you circled back round to Aunt Rosa: a nice bit of narrative completion :) And I loved the line: "So? She's like, a hundred and eight. You're practically a toddler compared to her."
Thank you! I just adore them, and I love when the Rays get together happily without trying to kill each other first (not that I don't like that, too), because AWWWW. They just make me awww. ::smishes them forever::
I think the next day, they probably got up, went to lunch, bitched at each other and then had more sex. :D?
THIS! I am probably about to EXPLODE FROM FUZZINESS; that it's Frannie and Welsh's wedding is probably the icing on the awesomecake, but I think my single favourite part is this twitchy, spiky-haired goofball who made his pet turtle talk to Ray when he was in bad mood because -- oh my god, the HEARTS IN MY EYES. *smishes the Rays together*
ME TOO. Like, I will be delighted when Frannie is shipped with a lot of people (I am also quite fond of her with Maggie and Thatcher and Turnbull) but Frannie/Welsh holds this special place in my heart. It is full of fancy coffee and the Police Academy and WIN.
sfdldskdfs OH MY GOD I DON'T THINK I CAN EVEN DEAL WITH HOW WONDERFUL THAT IS. Also: headcanon now. And I am not sure you understand how much you are making me ship the Rays; seriously, I am writing fluffy OT3 fic for ds_flashfiction's amnesty and Fraser is nowhere to be seen because I am so busy writing Rays in looove. XD
*smishes you back, you accidentally conniving thing*
MWAHHA. Aria, it thrills my K/V shipper heart to hear you say this. ::beams widely:: YOU WRITE THOSE RAYS IN LOVE. YOU WRITE THEM AND POST IT AND I WILL GLEE AT YOU OKAY? DEAL? DEAL.
(I LOVE Frannie/Thatcher, and also, Frannie/Stella! I think I mentioned this? Just think how that would be kind of cute and snarky and giggly.)
I really think Kowalski and Vecchio make things talk at each other all the time because they are ginormous goofballs. ::smishes them eternally::
I am smiling so hard my faaace hurts. :D :D :D I LOVE THEM SO HARD. The pool boy! The SMILE being the whole reason they got together, really. The pure ADORABLE and HOT and eeeee, tie-tugging!!
<3 <3 <3
Kowalski being charming! I can't even. BABIES. BOYS. LOVE. Hearts in my EYES.
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I just love those turning moments in a story, and had you chosen to write 10,000 words of this instead, I would have loved to see you expand that next day they spent with each other into a week, or a month :)
I also very much liked the way you circled back round to Aunt Rosa: a nice bit of narrative completion :) And I loved the line: "So? She's like, a hundred and eight. You're practically a toddler compared to her."
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I think the next day, they probably got up, went to lunch, bitched at each other and then had more sex. :D?
Thank you so much! I'm very glad you liked it!!
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Yeah, I can see that :) :)
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I think Kowalski makes the turtle talk in a bad Italian accent. I think it makes Vecchio laugh EVERY SINGLE TIME. <3
::smishes YOU::
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sfdldskdfs OH MY GOD I DON'T THINK I CAN EVEN DEAL WITH HOW WONDERFUL THAT IS. Also: headcanon now. And I am not sure you understand how much you are making me ship the Rays; seriously, I am writing fluffy OT3 fic for ds_flashfiction's amnesty and Fraser is nowhere to be seen because I am so busy writing Rays in looove. XD
*smishes you back, you accidentally conniving thing*
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(I LOVE Frannie/Thatcher, and also, Frannie/Stella! I think I mentioned this? Just think how that would be kind of cute and snarky and giggly.)
I really think Kowalski and Vecchio make things talk at each other all the time because they are ginormous goofballs. ::smishes them eternally::
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BOYS. I JUST.
I am smiling so hard my faaace hurts. :D :D :D I LOVE THEM SO HARD. The pool boy! The SMILE being the whole reason they got together, really. The pure ADORABLE and HOT and eeeee, tie-tugging!!
<3 <3 <3
Kowalski being charming! I can't even. BABIES. BOYS. LOVE. Hearts in my EYES.
thank you, is what I mean. :D
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You are very welcome, I am glad you liked it. ::twirls you::
THEY SMILE AT EACH OTHER AND I FLAIL, OKAY.
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*showers you with sparkles*
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