Comments | sionnain_fics: [fic: "gotta hit the gas, baby", rated R, Kowalski/Vecchio, due South]

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[fic: "gotta hit the gas, baby", rated R, Kowalski/Vecchio, due South]

Sep 28, 2009 10:00

Title: gotta hit the gas, baby
Author: Sionnain
Fandom: due South
Pairing: Kowalski/Vecchio
Rating: R
Summary: Three months after they start doing whatever it is they're doing, Ray and Vecchio take a road trip to St. Louis

AN: Thanks to inlovewithnight for the beta! Follows the original post-COTW ending. :) Title from the Springsteen song Open All Night. For snoopypez on her ( Read more... )

c6d, due south, kowalski/vecchio, ray/ray, snoopypez

Comments 29

giulia_serpieri September 28 2009, 16:35:06 UTC

Bravissima!
I love it! So sweet... thank you thank you thank you

Ops, just 1 thing, if you don't mind. It's "capito", non capice.

inathunderstorm September 28 2009, 16:36:43 UTC

EEE! Thank you! I am always glad to have correct Italian in my fic :DDD I will change immediately!!

Thanks so much for reading, and glad you liked it!!

mrs_laugh_track September 28 2009, 17:11:07 UTC

Oh man this is AMAZING. They are both such BIG ROMANTIC DORKS.

Also,

"No, you don't really strike me as the casual type," Vecchio says, and okay, now he sounds kind of amused. "You swore blood vengeance on that waiter at Mano's the other night for forgetting your side of marinara."

♥

inathunderstorm September 28 2009, 17:16:55 UTC

I totally warned Jaime they were being sappy in this. :DDD

Thank you for reading!! <3333 I kind of love them a lot, you know.

And Kowalski would, I believe, be very theatrical about his sides of sauces. :D

akamine_chan September 28 2009, 18:59:46 UTC

"--to complain about, you mean," Ray points out, rubbing Vecchio's chest. Vecchio's chest is fuzzy, and Ray likes that. It's like all the hair not on his head migrated south and took a nap on his chest. Ray thinks of it like a Chia Pet, but not in any kind of inappropriate or kinky way.

Bwah!

I love the "took a nap on his chest" and the inappropriate and/or kinky thoughts of Chia pets.

Fun and sweet, Sionn. Lovely!

inathunderstorm September 28 2009, 19:48:29 UTC

Thank you so much, Aka! <33333!

snoopypez September 28 2009, 19:18:44 UTC

MY HEART HAS GROWN ABOUT 40 TIMES ITS SIZE. I JUST. THIS.

I WILL BE BACK WITH MY ENDLESS COPY PASTA, JUST SO YOU KNOW.

KHDKFL;DSHGSLD;SKD;LFK;LSKLF;JSD;LKGJL;SDJFLAKSHFK;SHDKGLJDS;DJASDK;L

inathunderstorm September 28 2009, 19:49:20 UTC

<333333!

I AM SO GLAD YOU LIKE IT, OKAY. You know how I worry :P

<333333

I shall happily await your endless copypasta, as it is a thing of much beauty indeed. :P

\james/

\boys/

mizface September 29 2009, 00:29:56 UTC

I had to wait to get home from work to read (which was NOT an easy task) and lordy how I LOVE IT. You had me laughing so hard I almost choked on my dinner not once but three times (which pretty much means I'm either a moron for not stopping after the first time, or I was just *that* hungry for food and your fic that I couldn't choose). They were (just so you know):

there is nothing purple and sparkly about Vecchio's cock. (That does not, it should be noted, make Ray like it any less.)

and great, now he's rambling and he's not even talking yet.

It's like all the hair not on his head migrated south and took a nap on his chest. Ray thinks of it like a Chia Pet, but not in any kind of inappropriate or kinky way.Lots of other places had me smiling and chuckling, but those three were the potentially life-threatening ones ( ... )

inathunderstorm September 29 2009, 14:02:12 UTC

::beams!!!::

Thank you so much!! I'm so glad you liked it, and I'm always glad to make people laugh <3