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inathunderstorm in sionnain_fics

[fic: stranger danger, aisle four! -Due South/Durham County]

Sep 01, 2010 20:45

Mike Sweeney/Ray Kowalski. This is total fluff, okay? It involves groceries and a lost, small child.

( stranger danger, aisle four! )

durham county/due south, fic_2010, ds/dc, mike/ray

Comments 13

kari_hermione September 2 2010, 01:49:43 UTC

This whole thing made me laugh so hard and after everything with my toe I really needed it. Thank you.

Ray flipped him off as he stomped towards the frozen foods section. When Mike appeared a few minutes later, Ray pointed at him and said, "Stranger danger!" over and over, until Mike threw a bag of frozen peas at him and told him to shut up.

Ray was hoping maybe this would get him out of grocery shopping for forever, but he really didn't think he'd get that lucky.

I just wanted to point out that this is one of the best closing scenes ever. Thank you.

inathunderstorm September 2 2010, 02:01:56 UTC

Oh, you poor thing! I hope your toe is feeling better, and very happy if this helped at all :)

Ha, thank you, I'm usually really bad at endings. /o\

:DDD glad you liked it!

mizface September 2 2010, 02:07:22 UTC

*wipes tears from eyes*

Oh this. just so funny and wonderful. I love how Mike can evoke the feelings he does in Ray with just a look, or in how he can care-take.

And I love how much laughter is in this fic. When I saw the words Mike/Ray and fluff, I was wondering how that could work, but it does, beautifully.

inathunderstorm September 2 2010, 02:17:55 UTC

haha, this fic was just titled "fluff" and I clicked on it going "What is this...?"

Glad you enjoyed it! :D

thursdaynext_27 September 2 2010, 02:25:08 UTC

This is so adorable. I love how Mike handles Robbie, and Ray. And this bit had me cracking up.

The kid looked briefly up at Ray--which Ray gave him an I don't really know where this is going, either, look --and then back at Mike. He nodded, sticking his thumb in his mouth.

"Okay," Mike said, and reached behind him, and Ray had a wild is he going for his gun? thought before Mike pulled out his badge. "I'm a cop. See?"

osaraba September 2 2010, 03:05:40 UTC

ILU SIONN! This was funny and adorable beyond words! I love your Mike & Ray!!! And the fluff with them is lasjkdflsdjfj too cute for me to even articulate! \o/

exbex September 2 2010, 03:28:49 UTC

Oh dear, this is all kinds of lol and aww. I was the tiniest bit disappointed that there wasn't any kink in this one, but the throwing of frozen peas more than made up for it.