I havent yet decided whether this is going to be a one shot or a continous fiction. But your comments will really help me decide wheteher to continue or not. This is my first fic and that is the reason why it is so short.
Dedicated to Brina29 and fallenkaty
http://siophie1.livejournal.com/ Sophie and sian were sitting in the park having a picnic. They were making the most of having time alone to themselves because it doesn't happen alot.
Sophie:come here babe
Sian:whats wrong babe
Sophie:nothing i just want to feel you in my arms
Sian:yeh i like to feel you in other places to
Sophie:what did you say babe? ididn't hear you
Sian:awww nothing i just said i love you
Sophie:i love you to babe come here
Sian gave sophie a rather seductive look
Sophie:Sian were in a park there are kids everywhere
Sian picked up all the food and shoved it in the basket
Sophie:what are you doing Sian?
Sian: you'll soon find out ( she grinned )
Sian finished putting all the food into the basket and got up and pulled Sophie up and dragged her by the hands she pulled to a place which was more private and deep down into the woods and she made sure noone was there or no one could see them and she dropped the basket and pulled Sophie into a passionate kiss which made Sophie;s heart skip a few beats they then pulled away in need of air
Sophie:Sian i know i got my vow but i think im ready
Sian:well im ready when you are babe
With that Sian got the blanket and lay it on the floor Sian then pulled Sophie down on top of her Sophie then kissed her more passionately than ever before when kissing was not enough anymore Sophie pulled Sian's top over her head and started undone Sian's jeans then Sian pulled Sophie's top above her headand then undone Sophie's jeans. Sophie then pulled herself on top and was now in control she started kissing Sian's kneck , jawline and moved further and further down Sian's body carressing every part of it Sian was moaning louder than ever it was a whole new adventure for the both of them.
Sophie then entered the spot and it was only a few moments later that there was no pint of return Sian was moaning louder and calling out Sophie's name which kept Sophie going for more. Then it was Sian's turn to repay the favour and she did it perfectly Sophie went to heaven and back she was moaning so much and calling out Sian's name that she was worried that people may hear her but they didn't care they were making love for the first time nothing mattered more than that.
Sophie:I love you so much Sian xx
Sian: I love you more than words can ever say
Well thats it plz comment and let me know wheteher it should be a one shot or continous