finally got around to read.hysteriagaloreFebruary 1 2005, 19:11:22 UTC
chapter 1 feedback because sadly enough I haven't got time to read it all at once I love the opening, the parallels to little red riding hood is not just clever but very amusing (and not only because it makes me think of Integral as an old nan o.O). Your take of the "what big..."-dialogue is a nice touch.
I must say I am enjoying the "play" with known works and phrases, if it's one thing I like in fics it's parallels and there are plenty of those. Also an excellent characterization of Seras. ^.^
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I love the opening, the parallels to little red riding hood is not just clever but very amusing (and not only because it makes me think of Integral as an old nan o.O). Your take of the "what big..."-dialogue is a nice touch.
I must say I am enjoying the "play" with known works and phrases, if it's one thing I like in fics it's parallels and there are plenty of those. Also an excellent characterization of Seras. ^.^
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AxIxS might be interesting, but only if you kept the romance on the side. It probably wouldn't work if it became the main focus of the story.
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Kisses,
Angela.
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