I realize you are limiting your topic to just baseball and your idea of integration...but maybe you might want to include a small tidbit of history outside of the sport such as the black regiments in world war II etc. Yeah I'm a history nerd. I'm reading this trying to help out realizing that what they teach in US history courses is bull shit on a plate and you're expected to eat every bite. I'm assuming you are in high school? Seeing as MLA format is being used... you're focusing a little to much on quotations and not the depth of their meanings. Sorry if this seems a little harsh my history professors in college pounded these concepts into my head- also sorry if this advice is too late yesterday was my bday and I avoided my computer at all costs to make it look like I had a life * har har
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