I read the whole thing, and I loved it. There were some poems I liked more than others, but I like your style and your word choice... your phrasing. It has more impact that way.
I didn't dislike any. My least favorite was Anthem for a Victim because it sounded too much like something I could write, and because I don't like the song it's patterned after. I couldn't read it without hearing the melody. But, I liked it. Just not as much.
I liked Consciousness Shift because I love parentheses. Enfleshed reminded me of a poem I wrote once. A Knot Pulled Tighter made me laugh because it defines you.
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*grinning from ear to ear*
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I liked Consciousness Shift because I love parentheses. Enfleshed reminded me of a poem I wrote once. A Knot Pulled Tighter made me laugh because it defines you.
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