Maybe you should name the poem something that doesn't relate to it at all. Like the Emancipation Proclimation. That's what I always do, but with all honesty, I think "Let Down" would be a good name.
By the way... ha I'm Isaac, I just saw you on FacetheJury. Just trying to open up Florida connections now that I've moved here. Feel free to look at my profile on facethejury, my user name is iSxIxCxK. Or just IM me at Flecktone527... or neither, if you really don't wanna talk to me. Either way, take it ezzzz Adriana.
Hi. Well I dont live in Florida anymore, just so you know, ive moved to Santiago, Chile which is where i'm from. but thanks for the advice on the poem. u say u just moved to florida..so where are u from?
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anonymous
November 4 2004, 15:47:02 UTC
Hay again, I'm orginially from Detroit (wish i were still there), but I'm here for school. I'm a cold weather guy so this isn't my paradise, ha. Well then, hasta luega. fin.
about the poem
anonymous
November 6 2004, 09:17:22 UTC
chris the dingusbird,
Nice poem! im really impressed, well i think i can come up with a title for ya. How bout "the seductive sting" or "nature returns me" i dont know i thought i might give the whole title thing a shot. If it were up to me id make the title adri is awesome and listen to her or a dude in wisconsin will hunt you down O;) hehehe (cuz i will)although that doesnt have a very good ring to it though. Well keep up the poetry i really like how expressive you get. Its somewhat morbid....maybe just like me!
Re: about the poemsirenitaNovember 8 2004, 16:09:48 UTC
haha..thats right..u'll hunt them down..even though at the moment i have no trouble or threats from anyone. and ur right about the morbid part...i dont know why but i find myself writing about such sad and horrible things, like death and pain. i talked to my grandmother about it, she says my poetry skills com from my irish side where i had a lot of brilliant ancestors...amen to that.
Re: about the poem
anonymous
November 9 2004, 01:10:00 UTC
amen to that chica.......like the t-shirt says everyone loves an irish girl. BTW dont worry about showing a morbid side, cuz in the end it only shows your not as one dimensional as everybody else is and just goes to show how much depth there is in your heart. Thats a good thing, dont let anybody tell you otherwise!
I think you should name the poem, "The Venom Flower" mainly due to the use of imagery. I know this is all random, but hey.. i'm chris and i all saw you on facethejury.com and such. Its just even more odd that i don't live relatively close or anything. Just looking for someone to share thoughts with. Well if you are intesested having odd random indepth conversations, im: voltusvladamir.
o yeah, this is my site if you wanna check it out. www.fictionpress.com/~christopherkonopka
the venom flower wouldnt go too well because its not the flower that kills me.its the sting from the insect, the creature thing. anyhow...whats ur name on facethejury?
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By the way... ha I'm Isaac, I just saw you on FacetheJury. Just trying to open up Florida connections now that I've moved here. Feel free to look at my profile on facethejury, my user name is iSxIxCxK. Or just IM me at Flecktone527... or neither, if you really don't wanna talk to me. Either way, take it ezzzz Adriana.
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Ya i made it to spanish 3.
Isaac~~~~~
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Nice poem! im really impressed, well i think i can come up with a title for ya. How bout "the seductive sting" or "nature returns me" i dont know i thought i might give the whole title thing a shot. If it were up to me id make the title adri is awesome and listen to her or a dude in wisconsin will hunt you down O;) hehehe (cuz i will)although that doesnt have a very good ring to it though. Well keep up the poetry i really like how expressive you get. Its somewhat morbid....maybe just like me!
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chris in wisconsin
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o yeah, this is my site if you wanna check it out.
www.fictionpress.com/~christopherkonopka
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and thanks for posting ;)
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ftj name = Durer
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