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kyosh in sirens_fic

Ice Cream

Sep 07, 2011 19:21

Title: Ice Cream
Rating: R.
Pairing: Stuart/Ash- onesided from Stuart's perspective I guess.
Challenge: first times/backstories
Words: 1455.
Notes: It's brief and a bit silly. I haven't written fanfic in at least 9 years and I'm extremely rusty now when it comes to writing! And uh, for anyone who's not familiar, this is a mini milk :)
Summary: Some ( Read more... )

rating: nc-17, type: fanfic: slash, type: monthly challenge, rating: r, pairing: ash/stuart

Comments 7

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kyosh September 7 2011, 21:48:55 UTC

Aw thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :D

zetaori September 7 2011, 20:44:26 UTC

That was really funny.
“I like these because they remind me of your cock, actually.” he states without a hint of irony. “Small. Pale.” He sighs with mock pity for Stuart’s pathetic, imaginary ice cream penis. “And so very, very cold.”
I actually snorted with laughter at this point.
Also, I love mini milk, so win all around :D

kyosh September 7 2011, 21:49:34 UTC

I was on the verge of going out and buying a multipack of them when I finished this actually. I love the chocolate ones!

perv September 8 2011, 06:06:28 UTC

crying this is amazing. rachid and ashley giving stuart a hard time is my favorite.
one-sided stuart/ashley is my own personal canon and you did it perfectly! ♥

ncc_gqmf September 8 2011, 10:28:18 UTC

Cute!

(But psst -- his last name is Bayldon!)

kyosh September 8 2011, 10:37:43 UTC

*facepalm* What the hell, I have NO idea why on earth I put it as Talbot. I just googled and apparently that's a footballer! WTF?! I think I had a crazy brainfart moment or something.

Fixed, thanks for the heads up :)

diglossia_fic September 8 2011, 19:47:03 UTC

This made me laugh very, very hard, especially when Rachid revealed he couldn't deep throat at all and the other two just wince. This was adorable. Stuart is so thick.