Opening lines were awesome! "Deep inside there beams A closet, bright white But darker than it seems"
I love the wording and the expressions and the imagery. Not cliché, very original, imaginative.
"sex, lies, and rainbows"..interesting combination.
and oh my god do I love this part!: "i know just what you are a favorite mix cd in my car stereo songs so good they make me forget i have a radio songs of memories local music, coffee shop quality but now you're more like a scratched up mix cd i found in my glove compartment where the worst song is on repeat i throw it out the window of my apartment but you know i pick it up on the street i've already tried throwing you away"
hey thanks! i love how you tell me just what you like, very very cool. btw i use AIM and my sn is fogarty27 so feel free to chat me up... talk to you soon.
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Opening lines were awesome!
"Deep inside there beams
A closet, bright white
But darker than it seems"
I love the wording and the expressions and the imagery. Not cliché, very original, imaginative.
"sex, lies, and rainbows"..interesting combination.
and oh my god do I love this part!:
"i know just what you are
a favorite mix cd
in my car stereo
songs so good they
make me forget i have a radio
songs of memories
local music, coffee shop quality
but now you're more like
a scratched up mix cd
i found in my glove compartment
where the worst song is on repeat
i throw it out the window of my apartment
but you know i pick it up on the street
i've already tried throwing you away"
Awesome.
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And cool, I look forwarding to talking with ya soon ;)
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