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Sep 07, 2005 17:43
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lizziejune23
September 7 2005, 16:24:02 UTC
wow, thats just, so, wow
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marinz
September 9 2005, 13:26:34 UTC
that was nice
I like the tone
I felt it.
Loved how you were able to convey the emotion.
Fav parts:
"you struck me hard
at first glance
and the last one i had."
&
"but i've learned to touch
and to feel the soul
not so much skin"
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I like the tone
I felt it.
Loved how you were able to convey the emotion.
Fav parts:
"you struck me hard
at first glance
and the last one i had."
&
"but i've learned to touch
and to feel the soul
not so much skin"
Reply
Leave a comment