Free verse... no thoughts pre-cursing.

Sep 06, 2004 02:50


I wanna see you in bettie boop shoes, toeing the ground into a line curving to an arrowed heart. I want you sloppily smeared in that exotic lipstick with the palm trees on the side of the tube and a hue bright like strawberry taffy bowed up and rakish; smiling.

You are darling. You're a curtsy kinda gal, and the silver foil fabric of your skirt ( Read more... )

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monolith94 September 6 2004, 10:40:39 UTC
You've obviously got sex on the mind. Take a cold shower and meditate. You'll thank me when you're not burning in the bowels of hell.

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sirfrankiecrisp September 6 2004, 11:19:35 UTC
hahahaha seriously, what'd you think of it?

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monolith94 September 6 2004, 15:55:08 UTC
It's an interesting exercise, but that's all it is. In my opinion.

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furk September 6 2004, 15:20:59 UTC
Lovely. :D

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furk September 6 2004, 15:21:49 UTC
I love bettie boop. >.>

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sirfrankiecrisp September 7 2004, 13:54:18 UTC
I'm still waiting for you to add me... muff ruffler.

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kellykillsdorks September 10 2004, 01:42:36 UTC


"Such pausing images and circumstances discussed and seen under the overhang of a diesel pump in the noon sun..."

do you know what that means

that means nothing

"suicidality"

that is not a word.

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sirfrankiecrisp September 10 2004, 17:06:48 UTC
Number 1.
Who the fuck are you?

Number 2.
Suicidality actually is a word.

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sirfrankiecrisp September 10 2004, 17:27:49 UTC

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