The Excursion

Apr 16, 2011 17:58

Chapter 9/ 12

Language: English
Rating: R
Disclaimer: The Brokeback Mountain Characters belong to Annie Proulx
Summary: This is an au! au story and there are no warnings (No one dies)

Ennis accompanies his Professor on a journey to a faraway country. But when he returns, he is not the same …
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cosmok44 April 17 2011, 00:24:18 UTC
Wow - SO Jack/Jonothan? How can Ennis leave w/o the questions answered? Where did Jonathan disappear too? What is going on here? Can't believe we will have all the questions answered in 3 chapters...will there be a sequel?

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7upraf April 17 2011, 04:09:10 UTC
A sequel would be A-MA-ZING!!! =)

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siri2000 April 22 2011, 14:39:12 UTC
So sorry ... perhaps you want to have a look at my other stories???

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siri2000 April 22 2011, 14:38:03 UTC
Sorry, no sequel.
I'm thinking of Torry and Debra who translated and betaed...

Beside the three remaining chapters, there will be an epilogue that's not too short.

Thanks for commenting!
Siri

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tizi17 April 17 2011, 07:45:22 UTC
when i read farewell, i thought this was the last chapter... pffff...!
so dear ennis has found out a few things in these weeks.. let's see what he does with it! ;-)
thank you for the update!

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siri2000 April 22 2011, 14:42:38 UTC
No it's three chapters and one epilogue to go ;)

Vielen Dank für deinen Kommentar Tizi!

LG,
Siri

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annabuffy April 17 2011, 12:57:43 UTC
Could Ennis be anymore clueless? Jack's making it clear he likes Ennis and wants to see him again soon and Ennis doesn't seem to be getting it. It is progress that Ennis is questioning if he even wants to be with Alma anymore.

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siri2000 April 22 2011, 14:43:34 UTC
You know it's Ennis ...
Thanks for reading and commenting
Siri

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The excursion argentine65 April 18 2011, 11:50:04 UTC
Time for them to separate but I like very much the hug from Jack and his promise of seeing them soon. Thank you for sharing. Martha

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Re: The excursion siri2000 April 22 2011, 14:44:30 UTC
Yes I like the hug too :)
Thanks for reading and commenting!
Siri

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rimasworld April 19 2011, 04:58:31 UTC
I'm wondering about Jonathan & Ennis' very definite connection and how Jack will fit into all the thunder bolts. Very interesting indeed!

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siri2000 April 22 2011, 14:45:59 UTC
Yes it's not an easy situation for Ennis. Jack and Jonathan ... and Alma!
Thanks for reading!
Siri

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