The Excursion

[siri2000]

Epilogue

Language: English
Rating: R
Disclaimer: The Brokeback Mountain Characters belong to Annie Proulx
Summary: This is an au! au story and there are no warnings (No one dies)

Ennis accompanies his Professor on a journey to a faraway country. But when he returns, he is not the same …
Feedback: Yes please, it keeps my friends and me motivated!

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Bravo

[joetheone]

Thank you for the ending here it was a wonderful story of love and choices in love and life and living. I appreciate all you did to make this story for all of us stuck in fan fiction of Jack and Ennis I still crave it because I also see it as a healing and an opening to help other accept people for their differences and a great lesson in what love is all about it does not matter who you love it is all love. But, the world sadly still does not see that and that I'm still sad about I think these stories help spread the word and the more they touch people the better the world will be in the future. Joe

Re: Bravo

[siri2000]

Dear Joe, thank you for being a true reader of this story, through all the pauses, not loosing interest and always posting a wise comment!
Siri

The excursion

[argentine65]

Friend: I am going to miss you and your stories that I always loved. Is sad to see people leaving but that is life. Thank you so much for your time with us and if some time you feel like coming back I will be waiting. Martha

Re: The excursion

[siri2000]

Dear Martha,
thank you so much for reading this story. It is readers like you that make it worth writing and translating, thank you too for your warm words!
Siri

[ramona4jake]

Sooo who is Jonnthan ?! Maybe I'm too blonde...

Thank you for all your stories, they are beautiful ! Although I really hope you won't leave us !...

[siri2000]

Hi Ramona,
thanks for reading! I will stay as a reader (hopefully) and perhaps sometime ... who will know.
Siri

[grlewis]

oh my, this was lovely. i would have liked to hear a little more about the professor's meeting with his old friend, but that is only a side theme to the main story. and the reappearance of johnathan was a surprise. i think his telling ennis that his actions weren't a game was marvelous. again, i would have wished to have heard more, but i guess it would have been a distraction form the main story.

i'm glad that ennis and jack are going to the same school and playing on the same football team, but i'd kind of hoped that they'd graduated from college and were going on with the rest of their lives. i'd kind of like to see an epilogue to the epilogue....

your stories have been wonderful. i am so sorry that you will be leaving the fandom. i will miss you, but i will reread your stories often. i wish you all the best and am hoping against hope that you may feel moved to write about our jack and ennis again.

gr

[siri2000]

Thank you so much for reading and all your comments and friendly words.
I think I will miss this wonderful fandom too ..and will come back from time to time.
Siri

Following your heart

[forever9218]

Dearest, Siri:

I want you to know that I have enjoyed every single story I have had the opportunity to collaborate on with you and Torry. In fact, I believe the word for our longstanding partnership would be sublime. But, most of all I shall always treasure our friendship. Please know that you are an outstanding storyteller and I firmly believe that this particular creation exceeded all my expectations. The lust-filled pairings, the quirky character of the Professor and the underlying mystery that imbued both your Jonathan and Jack were difficult components to translate. Overall, I hope I was able to capture the exotic and erotic touch that your clever plotline and characters deserved. The challenge was a unique one and I enjoyed every minute devoted to this task.

I am saddened to hear that you might go away from the fandom, but hope someday you will return. If not, you can always consider me your friend and ardent admirer...forever. Until later.

Love, Debra.

Re: Following your heart

[siri2000]

My dear Debra,
your words make my speachless - and they give my the courage going on with my writing. I'm so glad that you worked with me and Torry and helped to bring this and the other stories into world in English. I'm sure your extraordinary telling abilities helped a lot to make them sound so good in English.
Thank you for all of that and being a friend - I hope we will stay in touch.
Love, Siri