Planets | Challenge #25: When Sirius met James

[applecede]

Title: Planets
Author: applecede
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None
Summary: That 11-year-old, the one with the correct posture and the sulky, sullen look on his face-that is Sirius Black. In two minutes he will have another reason to hate his cousin Bellatrix even more. In seven minutes, he will suffer awkward, stiff farewells from his parents, and then he will

Comments

[seaislewitch]

I loved it! What a unique perspective! Well done!

[applecede]

Thank you!

[moodring54]

I love it! I especially love the sense of time flow, and how you allude to the future events.

In summation: <3 <3 <3 (:

[applecede]

Thank you :) Hearts are good :D

[guns_and_butter]

The perspective in this is just brilliant. Very, very interesting. I love the allusions, and the way neither boy has any idea just what the hell they're going to end up being, and...just, love.

Now, however, Sirius gives the unknown boy a grin that very soon will become his famous cocksure grin.

This line gives me the warmfuzzies.

Well done.

[applecede]

Thank you for saying so <3 :D I enjoyed writing this.

[amberlynne]

He does not know that this boy will break his heart and own his soul.

When Sirius meets James, he does not think anything at all.

Aww man! I love this. A rather unusual style but it really works. You never know when you are going to make a choice that completely alters the rest of your life and you really do an excellent job of illustrating that. I love the little glimpses of their future together. And little wee Sirius already coming to his own after being away from his parents for ten minutes.

Very nicely done!

[applecede]

Thanks! That was exactly what I was trying to show - that that moment could have gone in a thousand different ways, but they were fated to meet :P Thank you for reading <3

[sam_can_do_it]

This was fantastic! Well done!

[applecede]

Thanks! :D :D