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May 28, 2008 09:26

Title: Shine
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woldy May 28 2008, 04:26:43 UTC
Awwwww, that last line is super-cute :-).

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bloodanna May 28 2008, 10:09:38 UTC
This is so cute! I literally 'Aw'ed at the lines "A glowing star is warm, comforting, steady and subtle. Remus Glows."
I can just see Sirius being around Thirteen and thinking, if not this, then definitely like this.
Thanks for posting, You made my morning. ♥

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anonymous June 1 2008, 10:57:18 UTC
"Remus glows. Sirius doesn't think Remus realises."

Wonderful line!
And great use of the prompt- especially since the picture does seem to glow and pulse more than sparkle or shine... you've captured sirius really well, a challenge (for me, anyways) in 100 word drabbles!
now i'm off to bed with warm fuzzy feelings- thanks!

-mimi

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