Strangers, Odd Times, and Colliding Lives [2/?]

[siriusmoonpup]

“Watson, please do give me a hand instead of standing there so fashionably.” Holmes muttered, his upper body straining to balance the weight in his hands. Wilson was far heavier than Holmes had expected, but then again, limp bodies always proved to be more troubling than they first look.

Watson sighed, his body leaning against the wooden

Comments

[anonymous]

Interesting! Hope you won't mind me noting a few things I think might be errors? I am eager to read more of the story. :)

There is some confusion in the beginning with Wilson/Watson - "Wilson sighed, his body leaning against the wooden doorframe heavily" is probably supposed to be Watson, whereas "Holmes grunted, dusting off his hands when he was finally able to get Watson into a relatively normal position" should probably be Wilson?

"it certainly was not the last time he would risk a life for someone he considered a friend" - should that be "his life" and not "a life"?

[siriusmoonpup]

haha i knew i was going to make a mistake with the names

i'll correct it now =] thanks for catching them!

[wild4rose7cool]

eeeeeeeeeeeee I love this, love this, LOVE THIS!!
can't wait for chap 3!!!!!!

[siriusmoonpup]

haha hopefully i can get it out soon =D

thank you for reading~!

[siriusmoonpup]

Hopefully i can get it out soon T__T im so bad writing chapter fics xD

[dilovesyunjae]

oh nooooo!!!

[siriusmoonpup]

haha oh yessss? XDDD

It is great

[floratang]

But since Holmes know that relationship between the other two man, I want ask that are the two of them ever think about Holmes and Watson relationship, and why did the two of them will in that era.

Re: It is great

[siriusmoonpup]

Im sure the answer would be in the story since I'm definitely going to play around with the Holmes/Watson relationship =] but at the moment, I imagine that they're not together yet.

Thank you for reading!