Lover's Spit (Pt. 1)

[sirpaulprincess]

Fandom : The Beatles (Slash)
Title : Lover's Spit (Pt. 1/2)
Characters : John Lennon, George Harrison, Paul McCartney
Pairing : John/George
Rating : NC-17
Warnings : Hardcore sexy times, a bit of swearing, angsty angst angstness, first time (cause those give me the feels)
Disclaimer : I do not own the Beatles unfortunately and all of this

Comments

[mclennonsfab]

Hello! As an experienced reader I only want to say that I found this absolutely lovely! A tad heartbreaking at the end but hopefully they'll find a way in the following part, eh? I hope so anyway and I usually don't even read John/George.

Also, "He already hated the future wife." - of course he bloody did! I love John.

If you're looking for a beta by the way, I'm available. Post the last chapter soon, will you?

Emma x

THANKYOU!

[sirpaulprincess]

Oh my goodness thank you XD. I have been busy but I'm working on the second today. That is so nice to hear that I did a lovely job, thank you so much.

Haha, I loved that line lol. And yes a beta would be wonderful, I'll try and send you it before I post because my grammar can be pretty bad sometimes lol!

Amelia xoxoxo

spit pt. 1

[rollit2me]

You did a great job! Sad ending but since there is a part 2, there's hope. Keep writing you have talent. I want to read more. I like Paul stories but I enjoyed this. Thank you.

[sirpaulprincess]

Reading these lovely comments is so heart warming and nostalgic. The supportive comments meant so much to me back then. Still do!