I can hardly believe this song came from me, be it the music or - more so - the lyrics.

[sispeks]

Structurally, it's a bit odd. The chorus doesn't occur until after the fourth verse, and the drum beat goes from relatively normal to military-esque when the chorus/bridge comes. For the sake of it flowing perhaps more according to the way it's played, read the chorus twice (it's sung twice when listed). I feel pretty good about it, nonetheless

Comments

[umbraphiles]

you'd best bring your guitar next time we see each other. you've seen me doing the photography stuff, but i've never really seen you play. it is absolutely not fair.
you still owe me that tape, eventually.

[sispeks]

You'll see me play soon enough. I'll bring a guitar to B'ham, as long as it doesn't piss anyone off.

I just realized that song may be considered "emo" by some...at least it doesn't sound that way.

[umbraphiles]

just as long as there's none of that ridiculous hawethorne heights screamo nonsense. if you ever employ the use of that shiz i'm gonna have to pop a cap in your spleen, no doubt about it. fuzzy little man-peach.